Why are the girls and women in this story so weird? Either they are perverts or sexual assaulters... Not one woman was mentioned without sexual thoughts including the MC's mother! The author doesn't know how to write women. The pacing of the story is very summary like. It's the type of things I would expect from an article review of the story rather than the actual story...The world building is almost nonexistent... All I know about the place is that it's the modern world with hidden martial artists. I had good expectations at the beginning but it just went downhill after the students started sexually assaulting the mc in public because of his sweat. The parents of the MC are also there just for name's sake. They contribute almost nothing to the story except their existence. Sorry to say this Author but this is my honest opinion.
As a person who is knowledgeable about baseball, this story hurts my eyes a little. Even in major league the biggest tournament about baseball, 100m is hard to see. Highschool students have an average speed of 70-80miles. Pros can’t even hit 100m much of a 13 year old kid.
the best from this batch I have read so far
Pretty amazing story but the chapter updates are pretty slow. Like any good story though, any amount of chapter is never enough chapters....
Zzzzzz heck no idea what's going on wid the story, it's boring and made me tablet which I was holding up face slapped me coz I fell asleep while reading
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I didn't enjoy the ending of this book, there was too much sadness and not enough good parts. it's as if the book was too short, the red eyed just came and went with no explanation of his origin and motivations besides becoming the alpha king. Too much was left unsaid
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I wrote this story because there's a lack of good LitRPG stories about crafters. Authors come up with these great worlds then only focus on a single charter and quest line who spends most of his time out in the world raiding various dungeons while ignoring most of the game world.
I wanted to create a story where the focus is on the MC's crafting profession and how he uses it to gain power rather than him getting some epic rare quest and wandering off to magically became a fighter. I want the other guilds and players to have their own motivations and be more than just names who's only goal seems to be to capture or kill the MC.
I want this story to be about farming and guild politics rather than high-adventure. It'll take a while to hit it's stride but I hope everyone will be happy when it does.
So... someone tell me if there is anything different from the original series or if it is written after the anime, with no changes or anything added to the stroy. It is probably a waste of time reading this.
From what I could read the story was subpar. The characters are annoying. The translator looks like he ran this through a bad mtl then edited it wrong. Overall the novel is 1 star and that is because I can’t give it a lower score
Trash, trash and braindead Chinese author and ofc trashhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh