MotivatedSloth
Maybe this is the first novel that I liked on the web novel and planned to read till the end, as it is well-written ma'am. Alas~ you've uploaded only one chapter but desperately waiting for more, the way you describe the characters was enthralling, definitely gonna add it to my library.
I have come to a decision that I will drop this novel,
Cuz I do not see anyone actually reading it and The current situation in my life not going well.
I don't know if anyone will read this but if anyone does someday, I have one thing to say.
Thank you for at least checking my trashy novel. I am gonna write a new one, that can quench the thirst of WN general audiences.
I will drop 8 more chapters for 4 days. After that Bye.
And Thank you to the ones who actually stick with me(If I had one).
BYE
I really like the novel. It's interesting and the author is doing a great job. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
like the MC and the how the story developed.
As a woman i dont read novels where the MC is (m) i prefer women but this one got me so hooked on the first chapters and i only rate writing quality and character design for now i still need more chapters before rating world background but my opinion is that author is very good at making you imagine his scenes without trying its really good so far
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Dear author you are an amazing writer who one in a million best book are been liked by me your book are amazing and wonderful I usually don't read these kind of books but I give it a try and I was amazed with the talent and words that are in it it touches my heart and that I really loved it right now I am running out of words to say I will say I rate this novel 100% best book you are one in a million best author in the world and continue to achieve perfection and do the best in the future . I am loving your book great job so far no complaints
I just loved it! Though your language is a bit harsh but I love the plot and the way you explained. Book cover is also very cool and I kinda like it. Great work author-kun! I appreciate it!
Even I think while playing a game what if suddenly a glitch occurs and I get trapped inside a game to finish it? So, this story seems excited to me with adventurous gaming stuff inside the story. Since the story is still developing so, cannot clearly tell about Urie's characters. A descriptive world is being designed by the author...So do not wait and just add the book in your library.
All the best for the contest, author.
The MC is being led around by the nose, and the author says he is an idiot from the beginning and it really shows. It is so aobvious that its infruraiating. The story capitalizes on the MCs stupidity to further the plot by scamming, tricking, and misleading the MC with terrible vagueness that only he would fall for.
It is a really well made story, if you don't mind the MC being lead around and not taking intiative. He mopes around about a past that he was determined to leave behind.
The synopsis and intro came of as presenting this as a slice of life novel, where we watch the MC explore the game world with minimal fighting. But nope he just gonna be thrown through the wringer again and become another 'HERO'
Just my out look on it, will stop reading it,may come back to it when I feel I can put up with the idiocy of the MC.
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