The author didn't even bother to research how a military school works... even though it seems to be very serious, most of the moments are pure reviews, even with the instructors. mc "grew up" in a military family but didn't even know the basic behavior to be followed... it is mentioned that he did more push-ups than his superior but he is not punished for it??? would this clearly be an act of showing arrogance, something extremely derided in the army (he would be punished with jail for showing himself above his superior even when they are trying to teach equality) and about the bedspreads being made in a specific way? I don't know in china (bunch of sick people) but in other places this is not necessary... what is necessary is for the person to maintain order in his "personal space". is it serious about them taking up arms so soon??? It takes months of psychological training to ensure that there is no psychopath (not all countries have this procedure, as physical and mental tests are required to enter a military school, at least in public schools)
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Copy & Paste storyThere is another story with similar plot."guy gets system, gives letter, ends up at his master's place, tested, thrown off the cliff, love not allowed, asking others about what to do when in love etc..."
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I read this novel and it's slow! And that's not a complain but a very big compliment indeed! I was able to go through every emotion the MC was going through. And the parts where the MC mentions about his love for his lover, they are pure poetry! And element of Sci-fi is just the cheery on top! As the story plays out in year 2050, the history of world counting the ones that author made were something I really liked to read. So far I haven't really found any prominent mistakes. Honestly, I am completely invested in the book and would love to recommend to read it!
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guys is there romance? i am at c.620 or something and am quite interested on this. also i am not really sure if i like this or hate this. the author made mc to be very smart but i can't stop getting this feeling sometimes that Jason is actually quite stupid. is it only me or do others have this feeling too?
One of the best warhammer 40 thousand fanfic books on the top 10 I have ever read and I have read a lot so I want more chapter updates. Thanks. Bye.
The book is written with so much passion as you can feel it in words. I love dark romance novels and this one is going so good so far. I absolutely loved how the female protagonist is showed as a strong character. I hope she stays that way. An absolute piece of perfection by author!
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Oh lord. This is horrendous.
As the synopsis says, MC's wife joins a television show. The wife does something first half of the chapter. The audience mock her for the next half. This continues on for a while. Whilst this is happening you have the MC moaning about how much he hates his privileged life - that wealth and power means nothing to him. He would rather just live an ordinary working-class life till the day he dies.
Just from hearing this, experienced readers should know it's a tragedy waiting to happen. And indeed, it's really tragic alright! For hundreds of chapters you have this MC with obvious mental illness of staying low-key whilst he, and his loved ones are mocked - only for the situation to somehow or other, reveal that he is in-fact...the world's richest man. It's the worst type, m@sochistic I'd say, type of power fantasy. This author loves underestimated face slapping shtick a bit too much.
I initially thought the reviews were exaggerating how bad it was. No. It's much, much, worse!