It starts out a bit rough but it gets better later on.
You will miss out if you don't read until at least page 20.
The only things I wish for are better grammar and more chapters.
And author I know you are thinking of adding NTR, but please, please don't. I and probably many others will drop this then.
Thank you author for making this masterpiece.
SPOILER AHEAD
Author, please make the MC create a tentacle monster he can control, hehe, and maybe some kinky scenes. Hehe