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The synopsis is extremely interesting. Captivating story from the beginning, cant wait for more uploads. Characters are relatable and I grew fond of them as the story developed. Well written and easy to read. Excellent novel, well done. [img=recommend]
Well, the story is undeserving of the rank 4. The translation quality is good and the stability of updates is pretty good as well but anything other than that is not good. The plot is monotonous basically what happens is Mc signs in gets heaven defying skills, instantly comprehends them also gets items to improve cultivation and an enemy comes out of nowhere to force the mc to appear and remind people that he exists. Literally nothing else happens. The characters are are nothing extraordinary. Only the cat is somewhat interesting and everyone else is just typical Xianxia template. The world building well is there even any world building here.
trash he can't even discipline his child and just let them go make trouble again and again and again, then he will go act like a pitiful dog then if that doesn't work the face slapping starts rinse and repeat
Good book. Easy read, the story picks up right from the beginning. The main character Carter seems like an interesting person but he needs much more developing. Overall, it's quite a decent book, highly recommended. Kudos to the author.
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Suddenly becomes super racist from Chapter 114. How is it possible, you ask? I was as just as surprised that the author was able to include racism into a cultivation novel.Essentially, the author made white people the demons in the book and goes off on racist rants.Complete disappointment.
Read up to chapter 23 and there had been no chapter where the author hadn't killed me with those cliffhangers. The author seemed to be on a spree with those, while hooking us like an incubus ? the characters even side ones are so beautifully developed and the MC slowly battles with his own emotions. Such a fresh book to read with a hybrid mc.
Golden spoon and plot armor. What is a point of novel with mc who can see ODS/tips about business that result in 100% Succes in investments.And on top of that after doing 0 by himself, he still go full face slapping on others. Its 100% system do it all for mc type of novel.
Author's note: There are few things that should be cleared before you pick up the story and give it a go. 1. The intention of writing this gaming novel is not to educate noobs. There are so many gaming novels talking about every skills dragging hundred of chapters in increasing the levels of the skills and blah blah. So to say you won't find cliche things. If you cannot digest something new then do not try this story. 2. My writing style differ. I am an original author and I have my creative space so my writing has its difference which might be new or unacceptable for many of you. So if you decide to read it then it means you can tolerate different writing style. If you still complain then your complains would be considered groundless. 3. I am not native English speaker and English is my fourth run on language. You can expect grammer 'degenration' at many points in the novel. If you feel sour reading poor grammer based story then my suggestion is to save your taste buds. 4. I have no plans of including romance or harem in this story. 5. This story is created in alternate universe so keep your common sense limited to yourself. 6. I will be hiring artist to draw main characters so that you can have general idea about our MC's team. 7. If necessary I will create character lists and the list of professions other than the weapons. Anyone interested to take look at those lists can join my discord server. 8. Enjoy the story development with the author. Have questions other than the above mentioned then leave a comment here.
Actually, I'm not really into sci-fi and mystery stories but I've read a few. This story starts out slow but flows smoothly with no sense of interruption between the dialogues and the scene playing in the plot. The characters are distinguished well with their own features and their interactions and reactions are very realistic which makes it easier for the readers to engage with the plot. I love how you describe the actions and the event with simple words but gives a very detailed image in our mind. There are no grammar errors, which is really a plus point. I make mistakes in grammar sometimes too and correcting them really is tiring xD and reading a story with too many spelling mistakes or grammar errors just makes the reading experience feel bland. So I really love this. The author has a good writing style and it keeps the readers at the hook to know what really is going on. I enjoyed reading the first few chapters and I will read the rest as well when I have more time. Great job! ^^
The plot is amazing
The MC with reincarnation cheat
The fatty best friend
Some love interests
Lots of villains
Lots of face slapping
A heck lot of fun
Must read!