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Looking forward to it..........................................................................Ugh.. How many more dots to put .............. Finally !!!!!
This novel has been really good so far.. I've read about 67 chaps.. the way the characters are written is refreshing.I'll be waiting for more chapters :)
I'm short of words right now. The only thing I can say is, I recommend this novel to everyone. This novel is quite intriguing.
Seems interesting, but the author describes the women way too much. We get it they are beautiful .....
Haven't read to much of this one, just started out but I need to say: great f*cking story mate! Love the MC and it feels like a fresh take on the classic vrmmorpg genre. Hope it stays as good as it is up until now.
Gonna continue to read, if my review should change i'll Update in the comments.
Would definitely recommend!
Too much grammatical mistakes, most of the time you won't able to differentiate who he's referring to......And damn energy really...what is this, you combined soul energy and mana and was too lazy to name it and thus it became damn energy...like literally,try to be a little more innovative...
It's look like a cool
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I love the scene between female kead and male lead it develop on their pace makung it enjoynable journey...
I love the main character in the story
This novel can be considered as a diamond in a rough, but still needs polishing to truly stand out there.
Grammar is improving at every chapter which is good, story/plot execution is between good and bad "depending on the reader's taste". I would suggest for the author to rewrite/revise old chapters with wrong spelling, grammar and loopholes when he/she has time.
Overall, it's a recommended read. Has a lot of potential and the only issue I really see is like I wrote above, execution of certain scenarios.
P.S. I'm still annoyed by random reviews that is only meant to bump the ratings, hopefully there's an option to erase those as the tend to give novels a bad first impression.
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