Nice story. Now I didn't even get bored sitting at home. Thank you♥️♥️♥️♥️
There is Great Humor in putting all those Historical characters from different timelines together. This is a Great effort from the Author. A lot of research about History and Mythology of the World is needed to create such an intriguing plot with such a complex World setting.
Honestly theres not much to say here, ive read up to chapter 51, and the most i can give is "pretty good". If you want my unbiased opinion, its a fairly solid story, my biased one however is that i couldnt really get into it and its not really my cup o' tea(I might read further in the future tho)
As for nitpicks on what i think is "bad" about it, or its flaws. I would say that there isnt much foreshadowing, author just kinda drops stuff, but it could be that im to stupid to see the foreshadowing, or that im still towards the beginning of the book and theres nowhere to really put it?
Ummmmnm, the english and grammer can get funky sometimes, and as of chapter 50 there isnt really any "antagonist" per say, more as other underlying mysteries that i suppose could make the story unique... Or it could fall into shambles later.
Thats about it, solid story, ignore the cover, and go ahead and give it a try if you liked the synopsis.
Bintang empat dulu, kalau bagus dan tertarik baru kasih bintang lima, dari sino**isnya sih kelihatanya ceritanya bakalan seru dan banyak konflik yang akan terjadi. Terus semangat berkarya gan
I rarely read apoclypse and scifi story but this one is pretty good! The imagination, the world, the systems, all of them are very creative, interesting, and amazing!
Highly recommended
excelente novela espero mas capitulo
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Realy nice written book Good Gramma Nicely chosen words And is just realy comfortable to read 100% recomended
the more I read the story the more bored i get.The MC tried to kill himself but then was save by the most Powerful human the "Flame Emperor". this guy btw abandoned the world because his bored.seriously your bored of the world as far as i remember most people that are bored of the world ends up wanting to destroy it or killing themselves, and your the guardian of this world, what i just don't get it how can someone protect the world if his bored of it.i drop the Novel
Great job, I am on chapter 10 now, and loving it. It is wonderful to think such a romance can start so fast, and smooth, even with the imperfections. Though sometimes what starts with a flame, rapidly burns out, should be interesting. It is wonderful how Yue is able to learn fast, grow stronger, and make profits so quick, in peoples hearts we often wish we could do so. It is like living an adventuresome dream.
It's depressing about how it down spiraled from something that caught my interest to become something I regret even started reading about. The first 40 chapters were good and I actually kind of loved it. I wished for more but I would say I'm pretty disgusted at this point...
Mountains upon mountains of redundant paragraphs. Copies of chapters everywhere almost as if to steal the fast passes and coins. The entire story is so broken that it's impossible to read. I'm kind of impressed how something that was going well could be made to become something so terrible like this...
I regret trying to read this and to others who are going to read this, unless the author is going to edit his released chapters, don't even try to read these broken paragraphs of words. It is not apparent at the beginning but recent chapters are extremely bad to even read
free 5 star review just to ask: Anyone know any good basketball novels that are pretty long and i can binge read in a few days minimum? Preferably ones with good grammar lol. I'd prefer if there was romance/system tag in it as well, there doesn't have to be though.
really loved it
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