this story can be describe in one word BRAGGING that's all what is about, but because of it there are a lot of funny moments so I will add it in my library
even though it has markers of the general genre of transmigration, it has a bit of flavour of its own, broadens the genre in its own way. the character and story fit very well , nicely paced development that a reader can follow
The real MC is clearly Whimsy. I have no idea why the author tricks us in regards to this. This is clearly discrimination against slimes. Wish chapters released more frequently as this is a fun story to read overall.
An Author shameless self-review. This novel is about many things, war, politics, morals and other things focusing primarily on one dynasty's rise to power in the game and the player behind it. But will also include and follow the stories of other dynasties in the game and their constant fight for power and influence. I appreciate all feedback and read it all whether good or bad and hope you enjoy the novelBefore reading the story I hope everyone takes the time to read the author's note at the start of the novel as it lays out what you can expect from the novel so you are not too surprised by it
I read the early chapters of this novel a month ago and immediately drawn in. The premise is very promising as it explores humans desire for a second chance after life for their loved ones and themselves. I am so happy Sabet has finally published the story here on Webnovel. I can't wait to keep reading more.Writing quality = 5 stars. For a newbie author, this is very impressive.Story development = 5 stars so far. I've read all available chapters and really like how it's progressing. We get information on the game slowly but in a good pace with enough mystery to keep us guessing. Good flow and pacing.Character design = 5 stars for now. Only saw a few characters so far but they are well thought lot and relatable.Updating stability = 5 stars. One chapter per day now, though I predict it's going to be more once the book is contracted.World background = solid five stars for the one I've seen so far. Can't wait to read more.
The story is just so good.It just keeps you wanting for more.But the author is cruel, cutting when it is about to reveal an important info.
Hello everyone!This novel has some major flaws. In my opinion, the greatest flaw is unrealistic gamers and lots of small flaws due to that.List of core flaws:1) I would like to notice that gamers are not playing closed beta. Closed beta is a paid job where people are testing everything to find bugs. Closed beta testers can not post anything or disclose any information. We can let it slide thou, there are different companies out there. Untested game capsules from unknown game company... aren't it insanely suspicious?2) In this novel people are complaining about bugs which is quite strange. For example WOW has bugs after each new update (since vanilla till BFA ^^ ), which is common for such huge game, and people are complaining and insult developers *in beta* ... aren't it absurd? Same for servers maintance.3) People are not worried about lack of feedback and support mechanisms (again it is BETA testing!)4) People are offering money for in game currency. 4.1) Looking at insane prices, real testers would have submited a report and wait while all prices would have been reduced (like in most betas).4.2) In all betas that I know, all beta progress stays in beta, and real game is real game.4.3) It is BETA, you do not play it, you test a game.5) It is BETA testing! Developers ask for beta testing, not players. Most gamers can not play for more then 2 hours per day, and even those who can, usually refuse to play unrefined games. So thousands beta requests is kinda...Basic minor flaws are from biology. Let us take for granted that goblin is equal in strenght to a common human male. If human mine ore, excavate stone, cut something, etc he get bruises and small cuts. Without gloves even tough skinned man can not really mine or drag something without inflicting self damage. And now let us remember that tools are rude and have no handle... So goblins are tough as hell (more like made from steel ^^ ) or Demon Lord heals them every 2-3 hours (or they will just bleed to death).I can continue, but this review is already far too long.Thank you for your time and have a great day!
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Bit early, but as I loved the previous book, I'm sure I'll love this one as well. Expecting great things, brother. You have complete monopoly over all my power stones.
I really really wait for this story to start!This story is different, light, and put a smile on your face.You must give it a shot!For those who complain about the strong nationalism, or nationalism in general. Those stories that are translated, are translated from Chinese. Those stories are written for the Chinese market, the Chinese market who has 300M-400M users.... (I don’t know the exact numbers) . In that market you must use everything to stand out. If you visit the official Qidian , you will find an astonishingly number of works. I’ve read there a few very good novels who don’t have even one review! So you can imagine what competition is.If you don’t like the nationalism show, if you don’t like to read about the Chinese valors, if you don’t like they’re respect for the army, maybe you should limit yourself to the eastern fantasy genre, and don’t read any other genre.Great book. I love it! ?
Thank you for the grate Translation The Characters are likable and past characters are never abandoned I hope you continue the good work and please do not stop the translation