This book is pretty awesome, I started reading it and the world development along with the character starting point was incredible! This is a really good storyline and has a ton of potential, however this author is obviously very new, he over explains everything. The progress is infuriatingly slow and it takes forever for anything to happen. I’m sure as the book goes on till get better but for now it’s kinda hard to read.
I haven't read it so don't mind the review. I just wanted to say that the synopsis is so misleading...at the top when it said he rejected the princess, I thought he would be a no-simp OP mc, then I saw the burdened call his sister, however, I didn't mind it as much. Then for no reason, a queen wants to marry him using her city as dowry, I can tell what happens from there. such as disappointment.besides that, does anybody know where I can find an mc that transmigrated or reborn a novel with a system with NO ROMANCE, I repeat NO ROMANCE WHATSOEVER THAT OBVIOUSLY INCLUDES HAREM.
I like the story until the gods got involved, I didn't like the prove your worth test when he's 95% compatability and it's been feeding off him, putting in the place where he need the system in the first place.The system made the problem that it the solved, that can be taken away,because gods don't think he should have it.
Yes! Thank you! Finally a vr novel, no harem, with a female character, no yuri, and an unforced romance. Just for that I am a fan of this novel?. Mark seems like a nice guy I hope he gets more development, otherwise I love this novel❤️
i quite like this story. i like that the mc is actually smart and not the fake smart some are. i like that the mc is somewhat weak to strong, and took a interesting way to abuse his knowledge of the future.
Am leaving this book with a five-star, why?Because the world setting and plot are intriguing.I tried my best to hop inside the mind of the author, I know that can't be possible. Only the author can create such a fantasy visual art.
It had good start but the author really gave up on the system and the MCs character in depth. I only reccomend this novel when boredom has reached you to the point where you too tired to even think. Then it is passable to read. I stopper at chapter 42.
The beauty of the work astounds me I find it very fulfilling. I love the ideas and how they are woven together to make a story, intertwining different parts and pieces together to make a whole.
I need new chapter Qiuyue(6)
On my list to read, let's hope it I'd a good one. Rest is just fill too hefty a fast pass, lasts be honest, we're have our favorites anyway
it was truly gem among gem sad everyone dropping bcuz of story slow pace sigh..[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
THIS IS AN ACTUAL REVIEW WITH DETAILS AND SUMMARY. READ IT. PLEASE NOTE THAT THIS WAS WRITTEN FOR THE NEW RELEASE NOVEL AND THEREFORE IS ONLY UP TO DATE ON THE MOST RECENT CHAPTER (14).
Tags: Male Lead; Magic; ?
Age Rating: 12+ - No strong language thus far in the first 14 chapters, but violence is likely to occur and there has been some slight horror themes.
Summary: A man calling himself Jon is transported to a different world, carrying with him only a plant and the object used to transport himself there- the Alien Eye. The noble Padt Family saves him from his near-death state and takes him in, offering him a job as a fruit grower. This is not his story. Twenty years later, Viscount Noah Padt, the man who originally took in Jon is dead, and his eldest son Leon Padt stands to inherit. Angor Padt, the younger son, has been mentored by Jon, and learned of a strange place called "Earth." However, Jon, at a mere fifty-some years of age, is withering away. He tells Angor that "Gaia's Will," or the will of this world, is rejecting him for not being originally from there. When Count Eton comes through, seeking the "Morning Dew," or a tea made from the plant Jon had brought with him, a wizard is accompanying him. Wizards are the stuff of myths and legends, but this one reveals himself for the Morning Dew. After it helps him achieve a breakthrough, he offers the Padts one favor. Though Angor first tries to save Jon, the wizard fails. Instead, Angor asks for the oppurtunity to become a wizard. During his testing, it is revealed that Angor does indeed have the necessary talent.
Translation Quality: 5/5: There are no obvious grammar or spelling errors, and everything seems fine.
Stability of Updates: 4/5: Hard to judge. I'm giving it a 4/5 since we can't tell this early on in the translation.
Story Development: 5/5: Already interesting and unique. Instead of centering around the transmigrator (Jon), it instead follows someone else who is trying to save him. A refreshing change from the multitude of reincarnation/transmigration/time travel stories on Webnovel. Additionally, the story seems to be avoiding most the extremely obvious cliches, such as a family drama over the line of succession (that we see in almost EVERY female lead novel and quite a few of the male lead novels here). In fact, this line is stated by two servants talking about the line of succession since Leon will inherit everything: "Those family conflicts you read about in the drama novels won't happen here."
Character Design: 5/5: Characters are unique and have their own personalities. Also, people can CHANGE THEIR MINDS. Wow. Mindblowing! The wizard, who originally planned to burn down Padt Manor in search of the Morning Dew, changes his mind and later offers them a favor when they give it to him out of their own goodwill.
World Background: 2/5: As soon as the wizard comes, we discover there's a whole other larger world out there. ...this is honestly so overused. Main character coming from a tiny backwater? Discovers powers? It's extremely cliche, and I expected better.
Overall: A nice change of pace from most of the cultivation novels here. I will note that it does seem to have some cultivation aspects, with breakthroughs and ranks for the wizards. I will continue reading this!
Please like this if you want to see more actual review and not just "Guuuuuuuddd" or "Ugh terrible" in the review sections! Also note that this is an early review supposed to give people an IDEA of what the story is like, and that there are only 14 chapters out!