pretty good book..... it's nice for a change,and would have loved it more had it more chapters.
When is this break going to be over. I’v been waiting for months now
am I the only one who found the idea of golems talking dumb...I mean they can get battle intelligence n all but talking like a person means he need to be alive that means that is not a golem.. couldn't continue reading more than that idea was cool but execution left me wanting
What a great starting..creation of enthusiasm for the story is the real success for the writer..Go ahead gem..!!❤️Anxiously waiting for the whole story.. dialogue r on point and the end of this chapter made me wait for the next chapter badly..upload soon, can't wait ...!
So far I have read all the latest chapters and the story is pretty good. There are zero errors and the characters are pretty good, it also kinda reminds me of birth of the demonic blade. I recommend giving this novel a read.
bro the moment I read chapter 3, I knew I was hooked, I knew no matter what happens I will read this to the end and here I am waiting for new chapters. This novel is hella good ??. Try it you will never regret it.
Don't let the bad reviews stop you from reading this awesome novel. First the r-18 comes in later. This is not a story that only focuses on getting lots of girls but giving those girls a good story with the mc. The adventure of the author from layers to layers is amazing. He even goes back to earth which is not something you see much from other novels with same genre.
The characters are well written. Its not a novel where he gets a new girl in his harem every 100 chaps. He loves his fam and his scenes with them are pretty wholesome. His fam also plays a role and they are not just in the background. Claire and Logan power couple is one of the best out there. The girls in the harem are not trophies and are trying their best to get stronger.
The cultivation systems are unique and might get a bit confusing as you go on but author has a guide for that. The mystery in the novel is even quite intriguing. The world is pretty well built. Author takes time to introduce the territories and its people. There is also a bit of comedy here and there.
MOST IMPORTANTLY, he doesnt leave his wives when he goes on an adventure. He bring them and fights with him together. Something you hardly see in other novels.
Im not saying that the novel has no problems but they are pretty small and are only at the start of the novel. The author improves along the way and massive improvements can already be seen early on the novel .As you go on you can see that Davis' adventure with his wives are amazing.
P.S. : Shirley is a goddess
Overall
Writing Quality : 4.5/5
Stability of Updates : 5 (Although we would love 3 chaps a day)
Story Development : 5
Character Design : 5
World Background 5
The story is all right, and has some potential.
Since it’s an intergalactic story, the world has a lot of room for development, and the “space cultivation” genre is always kind of interesting. That said, I don’t think the story is that well written, the characters have a bit of humor but that’s it. The conversations feel slightly awkward to read, and the plot is generally kinda mediocre.
Since there are other better novels out there, I’ll put of reading the rest of the story for now and try to come back to it later on if it gets chosen and accumulates more chapters.
Love the realistic approach to storytelling and the unique direction it heading!!! Even just looking at mc and mother relationship is awesome.
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This novel is hilarious. I laughed so much throughhout the whole thing. The meme factor is through the roof, trolling skills to the extreme. Great for a laugh, and the story isn’t all that bad either.
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