Kudos to the translation team for being able to focus long enough on translating such a poorly written novel. As far as translation issues go, the only odd thing I've noticed is that "Orc" might be "Beastman" in the beginning, but the author doesn't give us any information to clarify it.
The story is so badly written, it's easier to read it as a satire, but it's still really bad. The MC has no depth whatsoever and is like a kid with ADHD who has no goals or biological needs or anything. He's overpowered in only the first few chapters. Plot holes are everywhere, even just in the first ten chapters. There are barely an explanations about anything that's going on. There are many moments which will leave you wondering what exactly the creator of this series was thinking.
Although there is a game setting, very few details and descriptions are given about it. The dialogue with NPCs is absent. There is no action or adventure described. The story just says the MC does things or kills something. If you are here because you like action, adventure, gaming, or comedy series, this is definitely not for you.
I don't know what strong points this series has, but I don't have the patience to try reading it any longer.
I wish stories like this had characters with English names. If this is going to be based on LOTR then the character should have an English name like Shaun Chi. Not having that makes it hard for the reader to immerse themselves in the world building!!
If you wanted to know about this novel you can check chapter 1 you can get what is going to happen in this novel. and Novel is not my novel i am only going to translate this novel to 200+ chapter.
the plot is quite well done overall if we remove the part where its all jumbled up into pieces and jumps from one part to the other, would have been more suited to being a game instead of a story tho. most of the time i have absolutely no idea whats it about. total waste of time for boredom
This book starts off very quickly and that’s a really cool concept. it’s also very cool how the MC goes back in time instead of the normal transmigration. Very creative and unique concept! The world building is great as is the character design. Overall it’s very good though I‘d recommend editing your previous chapters to improve them. (you could maybe try grammerly) Otherwise it’s a very good book!
An acceptably decent read. It’s not very good or original but it is ok if you want to kill time. Seen every idea here countless times. Perhaps it would be too much praise to call this mediocre. I‘ve been hospitalised so take this review with a grain of salt, I am very sick. 2.25/5
This MC does everything a person with a cheat/system should not do. Showing off, exposing his supreme talent, face slapping... yada yada yada. And then everyone obviously targets him. Lame af. If you can’t stay low profile then he might as well kilp himself in the beginning and be done with it ffs.
The translation is awful ,this tranlator has ruined alot of novels with poor tranlation that you can get with a simple google translate. Translator 549690339. is doing this so when good translations come out they cant really compete with this fast cookie paced poor translation
This book reminds me of the old cultivation novels... It's nice.
There aren't many bad points in the novel. The grammar and punctuation are both decent. Proper spacing and sentence structuring. My only issue with it is that it feels a bit rushed. The chapter lengths are good in my own opinion but it just feels a bit rushed. Dialogue isn't a lot, and feel stiff as well...
Altogether it is very good, but would be even better if these issues addressed...
hi author here sorry for the shameless review buti hope you guys enjoy it and rate it for me and any feedback is appreciated thanks
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