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Why the sisters always have to be a burden in all the webnovel?
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Blatabt copy on a amazing book we already have being translated since 1 year ago
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Shameless review here, I'm the author for the novel. This is my first novel so I will be happy if you guys can give some input on how can I improve it. It would be nice too if guys can left a review or add to the library after you read it hehehe
I don't know what to write a review
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I don't mind the fact that this novel is unoriginal. What I do mind is how poorly executed it is. The translations are below average (with a chapter missing at around CH 18) and the lack of care put in the story, characters and worldbuilding doesn't do a good job at selling a compelling anything really.
I know what this novel is trying to do. It's trying to be the sort of novel where the reader doesn't need to think too much about the intricacies of the story, characters and world but instead just turn their brain off and enjoy. The sort of novel where the author is almost always making this up on the spot as he writes without thinking ahead much (if at all). That's an ok concept, it's popular and it can be done well.
Unfortunately this author just isn't very good at it. The cheat is overpowered but boring and meaningless, theres really nothing enjoyable about this series, it's a struggle to care about any developments in the story or characters. Insultingly soulless, low quality stuff. 1/5.
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192 chapters on qidian this includes chapters where he asks for a day off so even less actual content. anyway 192 chapters before he abruptly ends the novel midway into it the author had a plan but couldn't execute it well.
tell me how there is a manhwa in the
process of being written on this novel when it hadn't been updated in 3 months. the novels is great however and I recommend it. I hope the author doesn't drop it.
Exceptionally great so far. Syntactically a few things might be changed but in general, the story streams exceptionally pleasantly. Some of the time it may be a bit surged but keep going, Really good so far. Well done author!
Great book truly. No Cap