Great work, this book has lots of spark that can keep the reader tangled up in the plot. it has a lot of potential and i like it so keep it up!!!!
Read many translations from EndlessFantasy Translation good quality translation and very stable pace. This is more than worth voting for those reasons. As for the Synopsis it's a HUGE let down but Swallowed Star's Synopsis was the same as well it killed anything that would grab your attention but it's so damn amazing. Hopefully this book will do the same and prove to be much better than it's own Synopsis.
Looking good for now. But the author has the bad habit of FORCING HAREM.He did the same for A Valiant Life (Suddenly harem out of nowhere after a timeskip), and The Storngest System (A VERY forced harem, like really really really forced just for comedic purposes which completely ruined the story for me).So I am afraid to read this. The authors novels goes mostly like this, Not harem until the last 50 chapters with there being only one girl.Then at the last few chapters suddenly the mc fucks it and fucks other chicks.GG EZ.
Besides the cliche and plot style being used repetitively in the beginning of the novel, it gets extremely better later on. 10/10 Hilarious story and unique style/"system" you definitely would not see in other novels. I only wish it could translate 10 chapters or more a week at least.
My most favourite novel on Webnovel . Its been a year since i started reading this. I can't say how much i love this novel. I hope in future this novel stay as good as it is now.All the best Author and thank you for writing such a wonderful novel.?
~~As of Chapter Twenty~~Been an enjoyable read. We have a down to earth Mc who spent his last life wanting to become a police officer buy due to physical health he could past the exam, later becoming a legendary private detective (in his own right) solving many crimes the before the police leading him to past catching up having home experience a retaliation death. Being transmigrated in a in a world similar as his own with everything thing the same, but with a difference here and there. He works as an intern police detective with his golden crime investigation system.The system so far is one of my favorite there no shop or anything like that the Mc runs into a crime and system may give him a mission to complete within a reasonable time frame based off his current capabilities if he succeeds, he rewarded and if he fails to solve it or solves it beyond the time limit he just do not receive any reward so basic no punishment he get what he earned.The reward itself are not op themselves, but can be if used right for example, he may get something like one of his six senses enhance or another skill related to be an officer. Plus his interaction with other characters are lively to me and does not just feel like he is talking to himself along with the decent way the author intertwines his work, social, and love life I honestly cannot wait for this to be released.
Ok I spent the first half of this book cursing it because it was almost painful to read. I kept reading because I actually like the MC even if he is such a doormat in the first half. The story going on in the background with his origins is why I kept reading because it was interesting and other than the fact that his family is a total nightmare, and he won't stand up to them for most of the first half...it still had good points with the rest of what was happening around him. The second half of the book was much better because he finally stopped letting himself get pushed around. It was a process for real. BUT now it stopped at 200 chapters just as I was getting really into it and it hasn't been updated in forever. PLEASE COME BACK AND FINISH THE STORY!!
The first chapter is so captivating. The detailed description of the action engulfs your mind, like you a part of the happenings. Perfectly written.
This is one of the best Storys i have ever read on this app. The characters feel so genuine and refreshing its honestly amazing. The balance between the 2 protagonists characters and there romance is written to absolute perfection My only point of criticism would be this story would really profit from a bit of proove reading. Dont get me wrong it is by no means badly written, its just that sometimes there is a word too much or a Word missing etc. doesnt really effect the reading in any dramatic way tho.
It´s an really interesting story, and has a high potential, but the writer still needs much more practise. The scenen changes are too quick and comes almost unannounced. Most of the time I am thinking, "What is now going on?" only to find out that there happened a scene change. The characters are partly interesting, but to plain and especially the MC is a bit unsteady in his behavouir. First he wants not to be used, then he goes with the flow just because of something. What´s the most unnerving ist the too quick development. Parts aren´t really good explained and not as exciting as they could be. Especially i would wish that the parts in them something gets explanied to other characters, like where they explain that he got that invitation in chapter 40, would a bit more elaborate. The last thing is the grammar, there are a lot places where there should be comma´s and so on. In the end it is really good material for an good story, but it got bad realised..
its fine the story is average the background is fine but if you could explain a bit more about the place and background the writing is um lets just say the same as google translate it feels out of place instead of explaining i feel like the explaining give me more quistion because i feel there is something odd in the sentence because of the lack of explaining and english and if you could talk more about the character apperance thats all i have to say about it
Usually I hate stories with a system but this guy does it right. There's still a few confusing aspects but I assume he'll clear those up as the story progresses. Overall great story and world building.