_MrMoon_
I just read about 5 of your chapters and I have to say it's the most horribly cringe worthy work ever. Be it the MC or the ground work of your story or the content delivery which is like drivel of mistakes written by a 6 year old.......... Please improve.
Im kinda getting tired of all the Secrecy. When is the family going to know that he isnt a normal kid? Also when are you going to do a time skip? He’s been young for to long!Stop dragging it out, Its starting to get annoying and boring ?
Love this book
Love ... the book! Well written. Thank you for having this book with audio!!!!! I hope you will have other books with audio as well. Thank you ! For a lovely story!
taking to long for the next chapter
pop out of the situation where I have been so busy
Love the way the story went. I was both excited and nervous on a few parts, I loved the detail. Only thing I didn't like was the pet name for Kiara. But it's so worth reading!
Lovely.. Keep updating
awesome story, i am touch
Awesome. i enjoyed reading it
Book is very long winded. I'm on Chartier 71 and skipped 2/3 and still know what's going on. Get to the point.
Nice bookkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
