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I haven't read the book yet but the cover looks strangely familiar...... is that a a variation of the cover of The Record of Unusual Creatures?
I read the Raws. Don't bother. It's Polygamy.
[spoiler/ He sleeps with her friend behind her back, then Author tries to justify it in the next chapter by making it Yuri so it's 'alright' if the 3 in a relationship now] I'm not surprised if it increases numbers...
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Really awesome story with unique characters! I love the world building that's happening and all of the jokes that are thrown in too XD. It's only 12 chapters at my time of writing, but the story keeps a very consistent tone as the first chapter. I can't stop myself from laughing out loud sometimes! I can't wait for more! Thank you author.
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Hello guys, Author here.
This is my first time writing a webnovel in English, so I hope you don't mind if there's something wrong with my grammar or spelling.
Even so, feel free to correct it if you want (It's good to improve my English more.)
Oh yeah, feel free to leave CnC in the comment and tell your thought about this novel. (Please don't use any harsh words, I'm okay with critique comment one star as long as there's no harsh word in it)
Thank you for coming!
The story is steam punkish with magic flair to it. But it is also a lot different than what you might have read before.
As said before, this is a story about an ill man. It's 18+ for a reason and you truly shouldn't read it if you are not ready for it.
There are mature themes in this novel and I won't be holding back on specific aspects of reality that is our own world.
So get ready.
As for the story itself, there are two forms of storytelling. One from the perspective of our main character(Let's call him Jester) will act as the narrator, telling us the story.
While the other is third-person usually narration when Jester is not present in the scene. Making that particular scene not part of Jester's play.
So read it at your own risk. And if you might have questions, ask away.
I don't mind the fact that this novel is unoriginal. What I do mind is how poorly executed it is. The translations are below average (with a chapter missing at around CH 18) and the lack of care put in the story, characters and worldbuilding doesn't do a good job at selling a compelling anything really.I know what this novel is trying to do. It's trying to be the sort of novel where the reader doesn't need to think too much about the intricacies of the story, characters and world but instead just turn their brain off and enjoy. The sort of novel where the author is almost always making this up on the spot as he writes without thinking ahead much (if at all). That's an ok concept, it's popular and it can be done well.Unfortunately this author just isn't very good at it. The cheat is overpowered but boring and meaningless, theres really nothing enjoyable about this series, it's a struggle to care about any developments in the story or characters. Insultingly soulless, low quality stuff. 1/5.
The novel is good, pacing is alright a bit fast but tolerable, grammars good, mc is quite hasty in chapter 1-6 but other than that it's alright. Honestly hope that this would get picked because I don't see much romance novels asides from 99% vr almost real novel, I'm dragon novel, I'm gonna be lazy while getting strong novel and a bunch more thousands of copies. Although reading this might get boring to some but hey that's what fight, kill, offend young master, commit genocide to entire sect novels are for, this novel is kinda like taking a break from all those and once you're tired of those you can again read this while recuperating the weary mind reading the same thousand copies of itself. I'll end my rant here and I hope you guys read this novel and slightly enjoy it.