I love the story! I will definitely stick with it to the end, so, PLEASE, keep the story going! I had to take a pause from reading the story before because there weren't very many chapters and updates were slow. So I was just letting the chapters grow. But, I LOVE THIS NOVEL!!!
It was a good read. Even though the synopsis say the MC doesn't resemble a heroine, she is what you would imagine a heroine to be (less saint like and more a normal good person). There are many plot holes but the story is captivating. Most characters won't be fleshed out until later.Overall it's a good story that can be read when you want to take a rest from all the Xianxia and edgy novels.
good read waiting for the plot twist cant say much as the story just started but from what I gathered the antidote being the blood type is a bit far fetched. but good story plot
I just don't know why the MC suddenly became a simp! The whole story went downhill as he started behaving like he is a rich daddy buying women! The title of the novel and the story hardly matches and the story is very boring as it goes on. I had some expectations regarding this novel but I'm dropping this novel. It's not worth it!
Coool Story. First thing first... I love all the works based on virtual games and sometimes I wish to be in one of them.Anyway about this work, I love it. Everything seems awesome, world development - well planned, characters design and development - superb quality, storyline - A1 and writing quality - gooood and since the author is updating this story quite regularly so I believe I'll not have to wait two or three to get updates and that is just awesome. Since this story is in sprity I wish author wins it and for that I'll be quite happy to help him.Well done author.
I love the whole idea of this story and the world-building. I can't wait for more! I love the use of they in the first chapter. I also feel the 2020 simulation feels a bit like last year. It was all so strange. Like nothing was real.
The story has some good potential. Good idea even if its a bit cliche, its quite entertaining. The problem is the leveling system. The level range from the kingdom the hero was summoned at was so far away compared to other places like maroon city. There should have been a clear "Max level" if you will or a level range of people at the apex of strength residing in that world but what you see in the story is one kingdom having people 1-100 while other cities have people 4000 and up in levels. Its sounds so weird. If the author had given the level of usual knights or kings and court mages maybe then it would've been fine or if the level range would have been more logical.
Simp MC with a savior complex. Female lead is a higher status and I’m willing to bet probably a higher talent than him. Brilliantly written, I just personally don’t think I can read the typically good-two-shoes simp chasing after Mary Sue nonsense.
Its good but the paste of the update is slow but i give it to you you have a good work i approved to you
At first it was good, but the more I read it the more nonsense it has become. Imagine Donghuang Ziyou didn't even knew Lin Xuan capability, how could that even possible for no to know that when MC is doing a lot of deed wherever he goes. Ziyou must already knew it, even if there is chance saying she is busy, she does have a lot of subordinate who can inform her everything that was happening to them. This is the reason, I dicided to drop reading this novel, it's also annoying a lot of thing that doesn't even make sense.
The story is good and mc is not stupid and the system is not broken until the eighth chapter, when parkour started, he no longer needs the worker now when he started parkour and he won in ten minutes 100 “ingots”, meaning he has more than one hundred million copper coins, and I know that he needs one hundred thousand To upgrade any skill or ability
I cannot go to school today"
Said little Peggy Ann McKay.
"I have the measles and the mumps,
A gash, a rash and purple bumps.
My mouth is wet, my throat is dry.
I'm going blind in my right eye.
My tonsils are as big as rocks,
I've counted sixteen chicken pox.
And there's one more - that's seventeen,
And don't you think my face looks green?
My leg is cut, my eyes are blue,
It might be the instamatic flu.
I cough and sneeze and gasp and choke,
I'm sure that my left leg is broke.
My hip hurts when I move my chin,
My belly button's caving in.
My back is wrenched, my ankle's sprained,
My 'pendix pains each time it rains.
My toes are cold, my toes are numb,
I have a sliver in my thumb.
My neck is stiff, my voice is weak,
I hardly whisper when I speak.
My tongue is filling up my mouth,
I think my hair is falling out.
My elbow's bent, my spine ain't straight,
My temperature is one-o-eight.
My brain is shrunk, I cannot hear,
There's a hole inside my ear.
I have a hangnail, and my heart is ...
What? What's that? What's that you say?
You say today is .............. Saturday?
G'bye, I'm going out to play!