SHADOW BORN

Seeing as this is the same author as hvisland, I am expecting big things. i don't much care for Grammer mistakes so long as you can tell what it was trying to say. overall I will be sure to read till the end

Amazing story and really unique concept                                                                                                   

I really like the premise, I want to read it, it interests me a lot, but ...grammar is infumable, it is bad, it gives cancer, it cannot be read without consciously killing neurons, it is like mtl, but a little better, although it is not worth mentioning it is improvement, sincerely I would like to believe that it is a novel copied and pasted from the author and then start to edit it, but I can only qualify it with one, since I am unable to get past the middle of the first chapter, with how rubbish the grammar is.

The first chapter and I am hooked. Are you kidding me? Why is she locking his heart away?! Oh God, the darkness is enticing.I love it. love the pace, love the story, love Dan. I can't wait to see how this will turn out.

This review is my honest opinion as I felt about it while reading it. DO NOT judge this novel from my review and I will recommend reading few chapters before you judge it.That said, here's my review for the author.Concept was great and kinda not boring. Early chapters was great. However once the girlfriend was introduced, it became the flowery speech contest where both of them start speaking like some poets with increasingly cringe worthy lines. Taf will always start speaking in jargon which will test the limits of your patience especially if May is around. I read till around chapter 80 after which I just couldn't carry on. In my opinion, once a while is ok but the current amount is just unbearable Short chapters-I could skip 10 chapters and still guess what happened before. My opinion: either increase chapter size or story paceStory-One thing I always hated in novels is how the part of the so called grand destiny is revealed super early in the novel. I already know that they are in the lower planes.. the sect that they supposedly going to is super weak.. their country is weak.. There is a plane of gods from where the draconian(mc grandma character) came from. All these points should be slowly revealed in due time.My opinion: future plot should be revealed over a period of time. That dream was unnecessary. The trial could have been handled in a more better way.

          This is the second review I put out for this story I absolutely love it it has a good pace the main character is likable and the staff work on it are amazing they care they          take time to personally check every comment respond they're even willing to take feedback this story has a Lotta potential and considering how good it already is that's saying something