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Alright, so I guess this is the obligatory norm in this situation? But this is the 10th review. So I shall, ahem...shamelessly give myself 5 stars. As well as offer my own personal critique of my novel. I will avoid spoilers and only give what I think needs to be said.
**Take this with a grain of salt as I am a completely new author striving to hone my skills.
For starters, as this is made there are slightly over 60 chapters to the serialization. Much of the world has yet to be explored on both front; however, this wasn't the purpose of Volume 1.
The background of the game world has been given but the complete state of both the real and game world hasn't. This will serve the purpose of generating flow in the next volume. I will try to intricately formulate scenarios that express the world's state without providing humongous lore dumps.
As for character molds, I tried to veer away from the scripted and make their reactions fleshly and oftentimes comical depending on the situations. Characters with backstories, however, will have more distinct personality scenes as showed a few chapters already.
Some might think the pacing for the level up and character gains are too swift, BUT, I try to this to the idea of low levels usually passing by quickly as with a real game. However, the novel will be incorporating many different paces to add diversity. So sit tight on that.
Moreover, the common tropes found in these novels—I try to develop mine further. For example, the random reincarnation is not so random and instead facilitated by a being. Secondly, the random teacher making the MC OP ties into a deeper purpose; the power creep isn't easily gained.
All in all, I've put a fair amount of effort that continuously accumulates into this novel. As a result, I hope you enjoy this novel as much as possible if you do give it a read. Thank you~
Most authors rate their own story 5 stars. So uh I did it too.
I hope you enjoy the story???
I don't know what else to say.
Have a good day?
Good. Too bad it is not completed. Harry does feels to OP. And Hermione have no presence at all TAT
Oh well, at least she does not get bullied unlike Ron. Lol author, do you have anything against Ron? Although considering Harry is Slytherin it is not OOC in my opinion.
I am glad Harry get along with Snape though.
Overall I enjoyed this.
Author, if you still alive, will you come back and finish this? :puppy eyes: Please?
This story is lit! With a talented author, this novel was in good hands. I gotta say I'm impressed! Accompanied with hard work and perseverance, this will pave well in the future! Good luck author and may your novel be blessed with more readers!
Sigh, such a good story with good pacing, but why make our MC meep? It takes away from the story because as a reader, I don't feel that any unexpected development will occur.
An amazing novel that we can look upon to. The story is still developing and still has a lot to offer as the story progress. But this is my initial rate to the author to show my support.
Hello Author. I don't know if you still check this site for comments on your work, but i regularly check it as I really enjoy your writing. As I recall, you were facing financial hardship due to employment so I totally understand why your updates stopped. That said, I hope you return as I was really digging it. Peace
Keep going . I am only on my first chapter but i can feel the writer's imagination . I hope it gets better and better . Will tell people about this novel. All the best
the story starts off quite well.
i hope the other people besides main and side characters will have more "color" as they seem bland and well they don't even have names. the main character is also very bland. we only know his name and background. we don't know how tall he is, what is the color of his hair or eyes or what kind of face structure he has.
the background of the world seems interesting and i hope there will be chapter to explain more how the universe and galaxies are structured and how they are connected to the other realms/plains.
the only really bad and annoying part of the novel is that the writing quality is bad and the writer isn't consistent with the story. in the realm where the mc fights the insects he somehow had a wooden spear. there was no explanation how he got it and next he found a blade from a dead guy. first he calls it
"long knife" and then he calls it "long blade" the spirit of the mc is spear type and i hoped he could've just used the wooden spear, of course i understand that a blade made of metal is stronger but he had no idea how to fight with blade and he had instincts from his past life to help him fight with spear so the change of weapon didn't make much sense.
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First of all, you need to know this story is written in play style writing, with asterisks instead of double quotes. Other than that, every thing is neatly summarized in chapter 1.
The story is interesting and I can see load of potential. However, the update is really lacking as it's taking forever for a chapter to be updated.
Try it. It just might be your cup of tea.