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This book is quite disappointing i choosed it and thought its about magical beast but all i can see is the story is all about building up the mc's harem and the writing style of this story is quite perverted.
As far as I can tell this not everyone's cup of tea, but there is certainly an interesting story going on here not to be missed! I hope more will bring this one to the top!
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story is good. every character is interesting and have depth in them. I love to see chemistry between Ren, Mary and Marylin. And i want Ren to beat sheet out of the other chosen ones specially Adam.
The author tried to write something absolutely amazing but in trying to do so he turned this into a mediocre one. The story seems to be inconsistent and it seems like the author didn't really plan ahead(example - soul sizer points turned from 100 to 1000 just to support the authors new declaration that ouroboros wont let a lesser bloodline exist, and I think the author added this point because he might have thought that soul of light and darkness are too burdensome or redundant or overkill to have). A good world build is necessary to make a good story but overdoing it can also ruin the story. This author overdid to the extent that the story is going at a sluggish pace. Moreover worldbuild generally means describing the cities, environment conditions, their culture, art, architecture, that worlds history etc. but this story's over extensive world build (or gibberish to put it simply) is mostly focused on the unending philosophical pondering of the MC rather than the aspects I stated above
This shid is good. Way too good in my opinion. Makes me wish I had a time travel machine so I could go to the future and read more.
Lots of detail, characters, cultivation explanations, overall a well rounded story. Even some funny named characters. If I had one small gripe, it’s that he is still in the first major realm after 160 chapters. It makes me wonder about the authors goal for the size of this novel
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After reading a 1000 ch of this shit. I can say you will go through a rollercoaster of emotions whether you should stop reading this novel and keep wasting your ticket and vote for this novel. The grammar is bad AF. The world building is shit. The character is someone who has inferiority complex and an author who has a sadistic personality. Where others get strong really quickly and there is our mc who even though has many time gotten stronger can't seem to beat this people. The mc is a beta mc a character who lament on the choices he makes
All I can say before wasting time and energy for this novel. Just read it somewhere else first. Just Google this shit of a novel you will find 1000+ ch for free to read .There are various sites to choose from. Don't waste it here.
P.S. To the author if you read this.
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This a lightning fast, engaging action piece of a novel. While the writing is at times clumsy. With its grammar misha** and far too wordy lines. It's fun to read regardless. Characters are interesting despite how fast the story around them moves. Which in turn leads to not losing anytime with the storytelling. Props to the author writing this, will keep reading for sure.