Good story!!!!
Top tier book, I haven’t been this hooked on a novel on here in years. Incredible work done by the laziest dragon. Great world, great main line. Only flaw is it’s too short, and who knows when next chapters would come in.
good keep up the good work no problem and please don't drop this
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"I read until chapter 27, so here's my review: the writing quality is okay if you are a beginner reader. The story development was okay but not really unique, as it resembles more of a cultivation world (where characters kill and become stronger until the end). Our character's thinking is on track and fully developed, so you won't be bothered if the main character is dumb or makes silly mistakes. Anyway, the overall performance of the writing is good. The world background was also explained in detail."
I really love this on-going story so far. It's like riding a roller-coater; full of twists and turns; unexpected death just waiting for our twelve protagonists who were more or less forced to play the death game of some psychotic killer cowardly hiding behind the walls of a supposedly grand hotel situated in a seemingly deserted place, almost like a desert actually. A page-turner and hard to put down because you also take a chance in deciphering the code with the main characters, giving you the feel of being there with them as well, fighting for your very life. I hope the author would update regularly. I really want to know what will happen next. Dying to know who is the killer. I want justice for those who died (and will die) because of the fatal games. No apparent reason. Just plain game of death.
I first read this a year ago on R*y*lRo*d, and it hasn’t been updated in the last 50 days. If the author is genuine then this is a good read, otherwise I can’t really enjoy “Copy and Paste” work.
I really love this and can't wait to see what happens next! The chapters are a little short but I still like it. I hope the mc isn't just some know it all like in some other stories, but actually makes mistakes too. I also want to know more about the world where she is now... I think this'll be a good story and people should read it!
The synopsis is well explained and described for me... The main character is awesome and strong... The plot is not too fast not too slow just the right one... Keep it up ....
Hey the author here! Shamelessly giving myself 5 stars. I hope you enjoy reading my novel!
If you don't like an overpowered MC you probably shouldn't read it, although the fights are mostly between disciples.
The story is mostly travelling and exploring all the realms, and slowly but surely building up a Heaven Defying Sect.
If you have any suggestions or criticisms I will be happy to hear them! Please place a chapter comment or a review!
P.S. English is not my first language, so if there are spelling/grammatical mistakes please say so and I will edit my chapter.
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Gosh this story is