Your stories are amazing keep it up I love them
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Overall a very good read i hope it gets selected soon.
It's fine to me.
thought this would be amazing, yet I missed it was harem... yay...
doesn't writers realize you can have a girl, and break up with before finding a new one? instead of cheating on her, and then they all just be cool with it (as I see it). who convinced all those writers that the first girl HAS to be the one he ends up with, in monogamistic relationships? and if not, that it MUST be harem?
Well I'm going for all 3Decent storylineGoing down the luck routeHarem, yep its a harem. Theres your warningI'm dropping since I'm not a fan of harems
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The tags say that the story is yuri, but as far as I have read the protagonist is a man, has anyone read the story? They know what gender it belongs to if it is yuri or not.
My story is about a VRMMORPG with some common traits, but it also has its own characteristics. Because of this, I thought it necessary to describe some of the game mechanics for the readers do not to feel lost. As a gamer myself, I always have a difficult time understanding when a game novel showed numbers that don't make sense so I may have described a little too much about its details. And for me don't bore people to death, I began revising the first few chapters, trying to increase the writing quality and work more on the characters.
Kinda my personal preference but the story might be better if the mc was cold/ruthless or lazy *just trying to live peacefully* because it fit the title more. I first thought it was gonna be like the third party going to either steal power or disrupting the storyline of the world *cold/ruthless/selfish path* or try to stay away from the main character as much as possible and live peacefully *lazy/comedy/acting cool path* While the goal “helping myself by helping other” is good and all but it doesn’t fit the title and thumbnail. Might be better to just call it “Supporting the Main Character” i think there a novel with that name tho.The mysterious past of the MC is also weird, it doesn’t fit the MC. Idk what the past is but it usually have to do with bad thing like being bullied, murdered, ignored, etc... and if it’s any of this then the MC usually would not be the cheerful type.Also since this novel is about going world to world then it’s better not to give too much detailed background info. The fact that he started as a toddler is too boring, take too long and unnecessary Keep in mind, most of these are personal preference so...meh don’t worry about this review if you disagree.