Its. Not good. Poorly executed, MC doesn’t take any kind of action, he just holds off the paternity test. He keeps thinking, oh, my son resembles that guy my wife is having an affair with, and then he thinks he resembles him again. He’s having some kind of mental problem. Just take the test
I love this novel. Its very enjoyable. MC's and sect elders trying to benefit from eachother is very interesting. I hope this gets picked too.
Honestly the number of things wrong with this story outnumber the mountains in Bhutan. The most important problem would be the lack of creativity. By reading just the first 10 chapters you can see this is like any other lord survival game which is released or featured bi-weekly. There has been no improved plot or any innovative or new aspects introduced to this type of book they constantly release.
Awesome novel. Very interesting read. There's something different about this novel. Don't know what it is, but it made me read it in one go.
The story is not original. The change of new times has already been much better worked. The MC is terribly flat and unambitious. The secondary including his family are providers and nothing more, he has no personality or charisma, if the story followed a better pace I could ignore it but the background is even worse than the characters, maybe if at least there was comic relief if it held up as a story to read in a queue or traffic jam.
The title: the story never ends
The status: *Completed*
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To beautiful story. I like so I hope author will continue to right. I'm forever a fan of author. So thank you. I hope that in my country the book will be available. I want to have it in paper.
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I haven't read many novels of this genre but reading this novel is boosting interest in me to read more of its kind. I liked the concept and enjoyed every minute of my reading time.
that's all any story needs to be good, if you enjoy it, it's gold.
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5 star! I can't think of any flaws. So far there's no plot hole, well since the story is still on beginning phase. But what can I say? Everything is well written, although there are some parts that're quite hard to understand