The endless ocean, dark tunnels, and now we have misty island survival.You know the rules and so do I.MC is a perfect example of generic.He got his cheat that tells him about everything, follows its advice and boom, profit.He goes on to build a water purifier and becomes a water mogul.Sounds familiar doesn't it?There's nothing unique so far except the fact that it's a bunch of misty islands this time.However, one thing to note is that he got a pet. Instead of naming this pet using the regular naming scheme of Little ____. he used "Big" instead, how disgusting who is this person? How dare he spit on our generic traditions.
Hi, I just want to say that I love your story. this is very very interesting. I love how you create scenes that makes it feel like real. To be honest, I'm not a BL fan but I'm not also a basher of BL stories or anything. Just like what I said, I do believe in the uniqueness of every story. This story of yours is so good and I can say that this deserve a lot of support from the readers out there! You're a great Author! keep safe!?
Very Amazing novel.In later chapters(after Earth arc) it may became a little repetitive but it is be one of my most favorite novel on per with Buddha's Palm and Pocket Dimension Hunting. Also if you like MC like Lu Ze from PDH this may became the best alternative for you.
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I waited for such a long time, to have a good kdb novel, without a system but only the intelligence of the MC. I dare the author to stop writing, and my arm will extend to wherever the author is and strangle him, til he carries on.
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I’m starting to see a trend with Lumydee’s novels…
Tech King (first novel) - MC has a system that really doesn’t care about its host.
Amusement Park (second novel) - MC has a symbiotic relationship with his system, neither is dominant in the relationship.
Host what are you? (Third novel) - MC just thrashes his system around.
This novel (fourth novel) - System is utterly dominating/ tormenting the host.
What’s next? A system that does everything for its host… wait actually that’s a pretty good idea, a system that hasn’t ever gotten a host and is excited when it got a cowardly and weak host and develops some yandere tendencies when it finds out how useless the MC is. Using the Lumydee style of naming novels I dub it “Who dares touch my Host!”
If you ever take my idea and not give credit I’ll sue you for like 6 dollars and a can of soda.
On chapter 5 the boars defense is 15 so it should defend against 150 damage . Sword intent+100 attack does 500 damage so dude could just one shot it with his sword but instead changes to bow?
It kinda sound's like the authors rambling on in the first 5 or so chapters. like they don't have a clear picture or understanding of what's they're writing. Overall the concept and ideas are there but I think they could've been developed further.
Hello Daoists, I am Fateless, a cultivator who has chosen the path of writing through The Heavenly Sword Emperor.
I am not an English realm cultivator, so my early chapters were a little worse, but my English writing skills have improved since the day I started writing.
If you don't believe me, you can compare my latest chapters with my past chapters, and even then, If you believe, My skills didn't improve even after a month, you can quit my novel, and I won't complain a bit. But before quitting, please provide me your valuable comment on which areas I should improve. That's my only request.
But I also should think about it from the readers' point of view, so I decided to edit my early chapters for readers' convenience, but it would take some time as I decided to post two chapters daily.
So for some time, you have to bear my ignorant mistakes. As far as I know, it won't be difficult for you as so many of you read novels on M.......L Sites(I can't say the name here).
So I hope you would support me, Fateless.
interesting!! i want to read this!! looking forward to it getting picked!
someone knows the mtl name of this novel?
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