This is good **** it might need a bit more edit causeGrammar is a little clungy but it really nice.Straight from my ten thousand novel Try it you will not be disappointed
First of all, im dropping it, its grammar sucks, great story btw.If anyone can withstand its disgusting transalations, then welcome aboard, yu might enjoy the story hidden by the sacks of words thats all over the place.Author of the story is great but the translation to english is dissapointing.
I give 1 star cuz author just like doing either nerfing MC out of nowhere or forced buff enemy ?
i like them big and i like them round and perkyaaAAA
it is good hoping for more chapters though I don't like the MC's character personally but as in a fiction and based on the story it is quite suited
Simply the best to me?/?, wait a minute the system won’t take a few words; some effort is required. After all, the author had written such a great story, amazing plots, and consistency escal ates quality of writing from the beginning to current updates: There have never been a dull moment.I tremendously admire ????the author to consistently continue writing a great story, and producing such as work of arts from imaginations to countless words.Kudos to a talented author, you are doing great ??
this should be much better if the author released at least 20 chapters per day . I know it's impossible but who knows
Hands down the best story I’ve read in this site, eagerly waiting for your update soon author! a checklist for you new readersIf you like an MC with calm mind that know what he wants and how he gets it then it’s for youIf you like an interesting magic lore then it’s for you If you like yandere girls that are actually good and makes sense then it’s absolutely your cup of tea!
First the concept of the story is truly a breath of fresh air, but I do not know how the story has such an overall good rating. Yes, it's decent,but the writing quality is poor at best. There are a lot of gaps in the wording that just plain don't make sense. It also is obvious that the author isn't native English speaker because the translation is shoddy. Don't trust all the reviews they're just heeping praise with no criticism to help the author fix the mistakes which shows they're probably mostly paid reviews. Some may not but I'm not multilingual so I don't understand most of the reviews.
The story is very interesting. Early on everything is black-and-white clear-cut but as the story progresses things get Blurred and it’s cool too see how the MC Interacts with the Characters
Started strong ended up being another cliche wuxia novel, recycling every old tired same situation. From your stereo typical super spoiled young master of a big clan that offends and goes after everything with a pussy. This has to be one of the most generic wuxia novel to date. Do not waste your time and stones on this one. Not to mention the MC is a dull uninteresting generic MC. Same old great but dumb ass hell on every decision mc. Had such high potential but if you read this 75 chapter's in and you will feel nothing but Deja Vu from plot to characters to situations. Youll be like wait haven't i read this before ?
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