Great story so far but some grammatical errors here and there. I love the dialogue, it's pretty realistic and seamless. Kudos! Just don't know why it's taking them eternity to get to know the identity of the kidnapper, it's quite obvious...
Hope this gets picked! Seems like an interesting spin on the online game merges with real world trope since it won’t take 1000 chapters to see it happen
Website : qidian china Views : 5.10 million Rating : 8.7(3348) Chapters : 1400 Status : completed Word count : 4.89 millionauthor rank : great
It was good while it lasted. Now quarter of the chapters are locked. I know why you locked so many chapters but my gosh. You guys are killing me
Boring OP MC. Stopped after first 100 chapters.Becomes repetitive. It's like ONE PUNCH MAN. Solve everything with a fist.Disappointed!!
The story is interesting. I've been avoiding these kinds of stories but this one makes me change my mind. I highly recommend it for those who want to try new things. I mean, new great things. Mr Bee's journey will be interesting. Author, thank you for giving me a new world to explore.
The light saber is a scamThe story is about chinese myth god and cultivationOh yea the light saber on cover is purely scam!Did i mention the light saber is a scam?
Je pense que sais le roman avec l'intrigue la plus riche que j'ai jamais vu sur tout les + de 50 roman que j'ai lu ou continue a lire .Super boulot Auteur merci !!!! en espèrent plus de chapitre !!!
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So the book says complete but the synopses doesn’t match the book they don’t divorce or have a child???
This is a gem, the best gem. Please someone pick it up again, stop getting new novel and drop the old but gold novel. Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please
The writing style of the author at the beginning of the story had a nick and pick at places. But the later chaps show that the author has improved his writing style. It is really difficult to follow the schedule and keep up with stable updates. So it is commendable.I like how it was not only abt coming back for his wife but also for his daughter. The daughter's character makes the novel a bit more fluffy.CRITICISM- There are some paras that are loaded with information that makes you wanna skip it(at the beginning of the novel). But it ends up being some useful info which I feel like I later missed. So don't put too much info when a character is introduced-since there are people who try out the novel without having an ounce of knowledge on cultivation. They may feel difficulty in reading it.Except for this, I think it is a great story.