Love the idea of more or less starting off as a side character in the plotline of 30 different worlds.. I really like the concept and provides the MC a very realistic goal to attain. Keep it up author!
Ju-just a week guys I promise, another dropped video game novel that went into hiatus to the ever towering list Can I get an F in chat ...................
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'Boy love' is all I need to know about your story. To me, BL(sh*t) = disgusting garbage, potential suicide material. You are not right in the head writing and reading this.
Muy buena novela la trama es muy interesante y detallada espero lacontinuacion de la historia, muchas gracias y feliz navidad gracias author ytraductores x su trabajo
this is a decent novel, not an original one but still pretty decent, i haven't seen the mc fighting, face slapping or being a typical mindless fool that make up webnovel main characters.would say this is a rare find on webnovel
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Writing : 4Wasn't perfect, but was goodStability 4Read the chapter release pageStory development: 1This is the main thing that pissed me off about this book, I tried to love it, I love books with level and bloodlines, so this ticked allllll my boxes, but it was just soooooo drawn out, and the continuity annoys me, MC recognises game elements, but doesn't correlate other parts to game stuff, like lvl 1, with a % on the same line, recognises level as a game thing, and then actively wonders what the % is for.... Like wtf?!?Book draws everything out longer than it needs to, 1 chapter of other books takes place during 3-5 here, and they ain't even the short kind, and the MC doesn't seem to learn at all. Do X, turns out horrible, does X again, literally next chapter. like, wtf?He complanes about a gift that literally keeps him alive, every single chapter, usually multiple times, and for all the talk about wanting to know more, he never actually comes up with any ideas about what could happen or what stuff might do, he just says 20 times I need get a better idea before I decideCharacter design and world : generous 3, we're told literally nothing about the world other than bad shits happening now, which I figured out from title apocalypse, and MC is completely unlikable, and for a situation where his life has changed so much, and has been under so much pressure, he hasn't changed at all which triggered me, since we adapt really well under pressure, and he hasn't.
Dear author, I like your novels... I have also read your other novels previously and am eagerly waiting for an chapter update... Though i have not seen you update any other novels in the past few months I really hope you take this novel to the other level and continue publishing new chapters.
Author here, this novel is really good! More seriously I got a lot of positive feedback so far so I hope you enjoy the story. Thanks for your support everyone!
It feels really forced and makes no sense. the grammer is ok at best. The way the mc and the other characters act is so robotic i dont recommend.
Good work keep it up. The story is well described and told. With that, it was splendid, I can say that the author has potential to do more and even put more effort to this. The plot is also steadily building up and I am hooked on every bit of it. I the writing quality is also lit!. Kudos for the Kobe well done. I am anticipating more?