Good book. Keep up the good work and make sure you continue updating
I just don't like it from him being commener from prine before that story was awesome
The story is interesting and has good potential at the beginning.The idea of bringing the farm into another world system is really good.But I'm already coming to a major problem, it's unreadable (there's a wall of text in the chapters, no capitalization for the beginning of some sentences, punctuation is sometimes non-existent, chapter names sometimes mean nothing).Now concerning the story itself it started slowly and only became really interesting after about 20 chapters, which is regrettable, but it is better to build a story with a good basis.Some things about the story are not bad, but what bothers me is the Mc who is quite stupid, clear and simple, he has so many resources but doesn't even use a fraction of them and is too lazy to train even when he can make his shadows train for him, he still doesn't take it seriously and gets beaten by beginners who are even later, he decimates more than 60 dead eaters and kills them all and that's before he gets a good training and now in the 2nd world, he chose the twilight and honestly; it's probably the worst decision the author could have made, he's flinching at all the vampire eyes, which is a serious problem for a world that's not one of the most gory and terrifying.Overall, an average novel that needs a publisher quickly, but I think it has good potential, the author is also very active with more than 60 chapters in 4 days.Ps: I read the synopsis well so I know the author is a beginner and this novel is a bit of a draft but to improve it, you have to give constructive criticism.
The dude does not know how to spell and add punctuation, worst of all it just makes the story line harder to understand! Like come on just get a translator or something on the lines or that please dude.
As the author of this novel i thank you for reading my novel , i hope that all of you will like this novel .I will try my best to improve.
É de fato divertido e eu gostei muito, mas não posso deixar de dizer o quanto eu odeio pegar novels novas, já que tenho que esperar os lançamentos de novos capítulos(frustrante).
This story has great content and the MC is one of a kind and unique, at least he expresses the usual emotions one should expect of his age without being overly domineering or timid. I commend the author and wish he could do quick uploads till we fast-forward into his sect
I really really hope you don't give up on this because it's just checks all my boxes the only reason you got to lower scores because I had to be honest about your updating schedule
Nice work author, I just started reading and I'm loving it already
This book is actually really good. The book has an unique background that has some similarities with other books but the 'virus' part makes it stand out. Though, you update too slow
Good novel,!!;;!;!;!,€,!;!;!;!;€;!;€,!,!,!;;!;!;€,!,!,€,!,!,!,!,!,,!,!,!,!,!,!,!,!,!,!!,,!,!,!,!,!,!,!,!,!,!,!,!!,!,!,!,!,!,!,!,€,!,!,!,!!,
I hope you start updating this story soon I really liked it