For those scientists who wants to know more about women's anatomy, this is a must read. Writing is superb with stable release of once a day. Author does not yet release a massive one, max release it double which he admits difficult for him to do. I don't know but I can surely release more. #pluckingYin
Though the disciple trope is good, most of them have male protagonists that only accept woman disciples
For example, if the protagonist were to choose between a man with peerless talent and background vs a maid with a divine bone or whatever and no background,
He’d isntantly choose the maid
I feel like there are gaps missing between each chapter I'm missing out on. I don't like how the story changes perspective from MC to another mid-chapter too often. I think there is a need for a more descriptive background for the main characters and side characters. Overall good story.
I am not normally into this genre but this book had me from the beginning. I love the action and the humour of the MC. 10/10 would recommend.
The writing quality is strong and the description places you into the MC world, almost like you can see it yourself.
Love this :)
I don’t understand why the villain has to get together with every heroine. It’s ridiculous. Update more.
I hope you don't drop it this novel, and please edit some racist words to good words because I've read this MTL novel, there are lots of racist words or bad implications about another country, about person and many implications word about author's country
I like how the author creates and depicts the mc as an overpowered being, yet sticks to the morals of a human being but still shows his overwhelming strength, I think the book is brilliant
Conversation is like
Mc: are you a two dimensional person
Fm: yes
Mc: oh good
Fm: you?
Mc: yes me too
Fm: good
Mc: yes very good
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First of all, if this is your first book, then it's more than great.
The structure of the paragraphs and sentences along with the good grammar and punctuation are very well taken care of.
Although I don't like cultivation novels, I really enjoyed this one. Good plot and ideas.
Everyone should really give it a try.
it's been 6 months where are u author tell .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .... .. ... .. don't drop this novel it's good damit
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