I am really enjoying it. Please let us have more. I like that it has some novel themes and it is funny too. I really like The Library of Heaven’s Path by the same author. I would spend my fast passes on this.
It's like the author had multiple story ideas and put them into a mishmash of one.
He has two simultaneous storylines going on, for the ml and fl.
But it was soooooooooooooo arbitrary. Like the story style changes completely from the first dozen chapter.
The author tells the reader to read every other chapter if we prefer one protag over the other.
But then why even write the story that way?
I can't go on reading a story knowing I am probably going to miss half of it. I read till chapter 66, so I know if you read only every other chapter, you would miss a BUNCH of infodumps and worldbuildings.
So what's even the point of saying " If you prefer to only read one or the other lead, just read every other chapter of your preference." if the reader is missing a lot of the technical details.
And it's honestly hard to get immersed in a story where each next chapter is about another protagonist.
So rather than multiple good stories, we have a mediocre one.
Not worth the time. I gave story dev a 1 star.
The author also used 2 different time units, for usual things he uses day, minute, second, week, year etcetc but then he inserts ancient chinese time units like shi, shun, ke. Its very confusing.
The writing does improve though. but it's still very confusing.
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Very informative for those who wish to join the Writer's chatgroup~~ A decent laugh. It's nice to see things from the perspective of other, better writers as well. Through this story, I got to know a few more of the seniors and how their personalities are.
Mm, what else to write...
Oh right, for potential writers... please don't be afraid to write even if it's bad. Nobody starts as a genius. I mean, look at Ely here. Haha >_<
Very good novel, basically I have a negative idea of the genre and you will understand that I'm not a fan at all, that won't change.
BUT !
You have not done what i often criticize in this genre, in other words something completely absurd and cliché, you are only taking up the codes of the genre by adding your originality to it and that is probably why I was caught in the story, however it’s too different from what I like to read in and general and that's why it won't be one of my classics. I can only make two comments to you and that’s to be careful with the way you bring information, I find that you are not subtle enough and that will only enrich the development of your characters and your intrigue which are already excellent and secondly pay attention to the structure of your sentences, I find it a little too compact and I have the impression that the actions follow one another too quickly sometimes. Otherwise I can only congratulate you for making me like an Idols novel, it's a feat, believe me!
You deserve 5
The strategy to write and express the story is good and the story entertaining till now and the character ishaan is looks like little influenceiv till the around him so hope it will be a nice to read novel
This book so far is all about the character's complexity and growth.First, there's really no overpowered cheat system so far. He goes back in time but ultimately he doesn't even choose a class he is all that familiar with. Sure he has some skills and game knowledge from his previous life, but not really too much in-depth usage of this experience like finding epic treasures or performing speed runs based on this knowledge.So for now, the real appeal of this story centers around the contrast of this character. Sure he is kind of a mischievous, perverted fellow at heart but he also is a trainee priest with some kind of deep reason for doing this - it's definitely a first for me to see this. Also he appeared to be a loner in his last life but now he surprisingly has some friends and even somewhat stumbled on repairing a broken relationship with this neighbor.Either way, there's humor, heart, and potentially some intelligent gameplay in this story. And hey, who doesn't love a bold yet thoughtful fatty as an MC.
this is a nice book and it has potential and you are a very good writer so have a good day and keep making more chapter looking forward to it.
Can’t wait to get more chapters. It’s sad to see that it was not selected by the editor. It’s great novel, which is well written, super interesting. You won’t feel like dropping it till you read all 60. The best part about the MC is his brains and how he can scheme well, and think for the future while most MC are too emotional and fall for cliche traps set by even a random nobody who will die a few chapters later. Lastly n most importantly, it’s inspired from Otherworldly Evil Monarch which should be enough for you to pick this up.
Horny, trashy mc? ✔1000 yo retard with brain like sieve ✔ sad past ✔deserves everything that comes his way? ✔Might have changed, I couldn't deal with this bs any longer. (11th chapter)1st ever review, which is equally as bad as this novel.P.S. Author, I suggest reading couple of books about world building and actually thinking before describing characters. You've written about how mc is 1000 yo, yet behaves like a brat. I bet his 79 points in intelligence is probably his iq (His physical stats are like 0.6). He hates his family, even tho he behaves equally as bad towards other human beings.
Reading this feels like a novel written by a Reader rather than an Author. There is no exciting plots, the MC is plain without much character. Supposedly a guy with ***** previous life and plus 17 years, but still acts like a child, no uniqueness to him . Most characters are also bland. This is a mixed fruit juice of a reader who read a lot of beast taming novels.