TD:LR: Hidden machine translated novel for double the price of original works. While a tad dry read for the first 40 chapters with some weird plot holes and hypocrisy, at chapter 41 the editor stopped caring and the story becomes a mess. Not to mention it costs 2 passes for a single chapter. I spent those 2 passes just to verify what others have said and read the 40 chapters to make a fair review. If you're going to be a scammer with machine translated novels, be up front about it. Otherwise you get the 1-star review.
Nice Book Name, Nice Book Cover.Great plot, nice character. Everything about the book is good except for one thing. Your grammar! the poor grammar usage will make your book lose its potential. If you find it hard, use Grammarly. It'll help you a lot, another piece of advice, read books, don't just focus on writing, read more so you will have to compare their writing skills to yours, that way you'll know where you are lacking behind and then correct yourself.Good luck with your writing.
Finally something good to read The way it's going is really interesting It's smooth easy to understand .And i like how the world bg info is being told through conversation betn mc and other characters and not some exaggerated naration And it does" not " have any of those s.... like coz the mc is best the greatest only he can travel betn world bla bla or fight while being a mortal blah blah blah
I Have a Cheat System in the Apocalypse is a story about Felix, who has a system (I think), trying to do something? Admittedly, chapter six isn't a good point to give a objective review on a novel, however the first six chapters are so bad I cannot continue reading this.First off, the writing quality. This whole novel reads like you were hit by a truck and are now attempting to recall what happened while under anesthesia. Nothing at all makes sense in this novel. The first six chapters are so badly written that you will only be able to pick up some very superficial information. Mutants are being hunted by humans. Mutants have a school. The main character *might* have a system. That's really all I gleaned. (1/5 stars)Moving onto story development. It's awful. This might have to do with the way this story was written, but very little makes sense. I was planning on giving a general rundown of the first six chapters but I can't be asked to make sense of that convoluted mess. Anywho, the pacing is absolutely insane, main character is randomly thrown into combat multiple times, each reason he starts combat is increasingly more stupid than the last. After the main character nearly gets assassinated, but narrowly wins, a intelligent gorilla attacks them. The main character saves his assassin (thats right), and kills the gorilla. Promptly following, he falls over and dies. After this, we are suddenly thrown into a MMORPG, because why not. I could continue rambling on about various inconsistencies and plot holes that are in the first six chapters, but all you need to know is that almost every single character, idea, place, setting, that is introduced doesn't make sense. (1/5 stars)Character design. I don't really know all that much, main character has a weird obsession with money, has a close friend, that's about it. Characters are also convoluted and the main character seems like he has some form of autism, so I'm just going to default this to two stars. (2/5 stars)World background is a mess. So, from what vague inferences I can make, this is a apocalyptic world, where humanity is being attacked by various mutant beasts. So, in spite of this, the government decides to hunt down and kill humans with abilities? Anyway, school the main character has a super-powerful mutant in charge, but all it takes to pressure him is a mech and like ten police officers. Well, author only spent about five chapters in the real world before the main character dies and goes into a MMORPG world, so whatever. (1/5 stars)Overall, this is a very bad novel, but in a new way. I haven't seen as many novels that are as convoluted as this. Writing quality is very bad, and causes a lot of confusion right off the bat. The story development and world background don't help this either, making reading this even more confusing. I would recommend the author to use a story board and plan ahead, and at the very least fixing the abhorrent pacing issues. I give this novel 2.0 stars out of 5.
I didn't get far but I really can't stand the MC anymore. Why does every single MC after getting the system get so annoying? They keep thinking they deserve everything. First, they started with nothing and now they finally get something and they believe nothing is fair.
Deserves the high ratings
Very much enjoying the development of the MC - he does not start as OP but I feel as the story develops this will change.
Like the world setting - would like a summary page where the author can capture all the skills, races etc
Would highly recommend reading and beg the author to release more please!
This story is entertaining and has distracted me for a bit. I have read many Harry Potter fan fictions but I have never read one quite like this.
an awesome write up. funny part is both harem readers and nonharem readings are both being entertain.....
This book is so amazing. Would read a thousand times over. it a great mixture of deep depression and happiness. I really hope for more. Thanks
An amazing novel don’t drop it please and more chapter
Such an amazing start! I love the author's other novel too, but I think I may grow to like this one even more!!! I hope this one can be updated soon! But for now I'll patiently wait until this gem is polished and released to the world for us to admire and praise! Thank you for an amazing story, love your eternal fan!
Didn't find too many mistakes, the story is addicting and gets you hooked easily.It's about a fatty who does game testing for a living while part-time streaming,He got into game testing after getting fired (he got bullied there --> it's something that reflects on his personality).Apocalypse started when he accepted the invitation from a mysterious game company to beta test their new game "World Simulation". From what I understood, it's a game about surviving at the end of the world.What's most interesting about becoming a beta tester for this game is that reality starts becoming more and more like game (the game has real time feature, bug fixing).In conclusion, from the 20 chapters that are out, I rate this novel as a 4.4 with 4 in writing quality (didn't see any gramatical erros, but english is not my native language so what do I know), 5 in stability of updates (2-3 chaps a day), 4 in Story Development (didn't give it a 5 since I don't exactly know how it will develop), 4 in Character Design (the characters feel real, but I'm a loner so don't trust my word for it), 5 in World Background (don't know why I gave it a 5, just move on to other reviews or start reading the book).