Hardy1j
This is a well written novel that includes a compelling plot, memorable characters, and a clever way to implement imagary. The novel is written with depth and sophistication and yet, easy to follow. Highly recommended!
alright... this young man is full of indecision. The setting for this story is good, but you basically threw it out the window early on. James just seems like any other slightly experienced player if not a little less do to some questionable decisions. also i understand that his sister is sick and he needs to make 400k in a month, but he already has 300k in less than a day, so that canary has pretty much sung its song. His mentality also seems really weak for someone who reincarnated. On that note i think the story has potential it just needs some polishing and to stay on track with the focus points of the story.
Author here. This is my wsa addition, and a book that I spent a lot of time trying to perfect. Although I don't dare claim that it is, I think that this is a well written book.There will be guild building, op mc, absolutely no harem, and good progression, I promise.and ever since I finished my exams, I have also tried my best to maintain a 2 chapter a day release cycle. I think that you will love the book as long as u give it a chance.
NEEDS HAREM/ROMANCE TAG. i’m not here to read abt mc flirting with a japanese chick (whose name is longzi - wth??) the “plot holes” and “lack of logic” and “blind luck” stuff doesn’t bother me. but they are gross.
A pretty solid book in my opinion. Its a mish mash of things, but its written in an organized manner. Good read overall. Shame that if it gets popular here... you already know what would happen.
Very poor buildup. Rushed beyond compare and nothing is explained. A totally unreliable NEET MC dies from Weebing too hard apparently, and then becomes reliable, able to kill, smart, and good with girls after he transmigrates. He is the polar opposite of the previous body’s owner, and does multiple things totally out of character. It’s an interesting story design, but the execution is just garbage. I was hooked and spent about an hour or two reading more than I planned, but I kept cringing at the sudden unexplained changes and finally couldn’t handle any more.Points for the storyNone for the design
do all Chinese accept being degraded, without defending? god I'd be embarrassed especially if a customer is allowed to "lecture" me for an hour, for NOTHING!
ooooh, really nice work. ??♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
Novel stopped updating at 165. Don’t bother picking it up and wasting your time or money on this.
Stupid mc. Trash novel. 140 characters mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm
This novel is just like the others, but different statuses. Honestly, this is just getting tiresome and boring.............................
(As of chapter 35) I have loved reading this thus far! When I first saw this in Trail Pool although I liked the concept of the title and summary, I ignored it. As I read many like and did not have the mood for it. But today out of boredom, I gave it a chance and I do not regret it. Although there seem to be a surplus of plot hole and face slapping by now I am used to that stuff. What really caught my eye was how it began, Mc's situation, and how people reacted to his actions. It felt alive! I'm not sure of the rest of the story, but as far as chapter 35 is concerned, it's worth my five stars. The next chapters I will also read, but probably not repost a review, I will leave it to others to judge.
