This is a mess . A BEAUTIFUL mess ! i have a lot of Fun reading this as the writer make things very interesting. This is a fun twist on the genre and is very entertaining.
Finally finished reading.Foreword: I started reading this book thanks to "I'm Really Not The Demon God's Lackey
You need to shore up your grammar skills. You have a lot of missing commas, unnecessary addition of -ed, and wordy sentences. But considering you just started, it is okay. Add more sensory details; you say forest, but what about it? Your characters need more depth to them. What drives them? What weird quirks do they have? How do they deal with issues? etc...Keep writing and you will get better, just never give up!
a nice book with nice and understandable characters that you want to see dead:)
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Mc is a fuctard , what's so important about so that you are willing to see your wife suffer for three years , and grammar is horrible . But please few chapters so that I will have many companions who have suffered reading it
please continue this book it us very awesome
the novel is very good, it's a different type and I like the way the story progresses ..
am loving this already
Nice book. well done author
I Love it . It’s an amazing book.I wish there a movie
Amazing story, read in one day. whole part is mind blowing and new twist was epic Samuel and Victoria's marriage ommg waiting for further parts......️