broooo the storyline seems really cool and interesting but the writing style just doesn't work out for me at least. Plus about proving to Sam's fam he could have just shown the contract and surely even he could have understood that flauting his position in the guild could improve Sam and Chad's standing plus the ""how magical"" and "how troublesome" bit would have been funny if used less. Rn they just came off as irritating
i love this story! full of suspense and gives me the chills from just reading about the characters in them and what they are about to face. Thank you for writing this, Author! More chapters please! ^_^
Wow. The story revolves around six couples! That’s amazing! ? It’s hard to keep up the story if there are many characters but you managed it. ?? For the writing, it’s a little bit confusing at first but overall, it has a good plot. ? Keep it up, author!
I loved how the book started with chasing thief, the concept was amazing and from the very first line caught my attention, I can't wait to read more chapters, I wish you all the best author, your book is amazing ???
You're novel be like speedrunning. I can't believe it hasn't even been a week since this work started, and it's your first novel on top of that!That just means you're work is really great!
[This review adheres to the five different rating categories Webnovel provides. In order, Writing quality, stability of updates, story development, character design, and world background. I will separate these into different paragraphs for your convenience.]I rate the writing quality four stars. There isn't an egregious amount of spelling mistakes throughout the currently released chapters, and the flow of reading is pretty good with the exception of the first chapter. Hopefully, you can call me a doofus for saying that once my fellow author polishes it to represent his peak performance.Stability of updates is five stars. With an initial five chapters to start everyone off, I'm sure we can expect more at a steady pace going forward.Story Development is five stars. The foundation of the story was laid out both in the synopsis and the initial chapters. We can clearly see the suffering the protagonist must endure, making me want to root for him and hope that he'll come out of this terrible ordeal.Character design is three stars. No one in the story has a memorable appearance thus far in my mind, though they are quite animated despite that. They aren't cardboard cutouts wearing clothes, which is good, but they could certainly use some more descriptors.World Background is five stars. While laying down the foundation of the story, we learn a great deal of the world's history. It's a point of interest in the synopsis, and a cause of conflict in the story.The overall rating I give this novel is 4.4 stars. It's pretty good!
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j'ai adorer ce novel , j'ai me suis amuser a imaginer si il créez des jeux vidéo qu'est ce que sa donnerait merci de traduire ce roman hate de voir plus de mise a jour
The story is good. I’m looking forward to it being selected. Also whoever decided to lower the chaps from 60 to 40 for trail read should eat a shoe.
There were some translation mistakes but all n all i liked it and would like to more chapters. Story development is decent and plot is revealed 1 by 1. But MC is also quite strong.
The story plot so far is actually quite interesting but the gammar and the writing skills of the author is not very good as most of the sentences are run off lines and do not match with the next making it quite hard to read if the author improves on his writing the novel will be way better.
Very good apocalypse novel so far the story and character developement have all been on point. It definitely has the potential to be one of the best novels of it's type I've read. Really looking forward to how it progresses.