"... What are you doing?"
In Ling Tian’s mind, a familiar stream of memories unfolded…
This is very good so far. Please keep updating
This will be my last book in this platform. I don’t have high hopes for it, but I want to give it a good ending. It will be a long, long, boring ride :)
The concept of Outcasts is brilliant and the writing style is top level. I won't reveal anything about the plots but I must say this that the main protagonist's character development looks far more better than any of the characters. Strange powers, the brilliant plot designs along with overall world building that has so much potential to surpass many of the top novels. I hope that you get contracted soon or accepted by webnovel if you ever apply for the contract. Well done and keep going. Thats's it...
I love your writing skills,plot and everything. Please write furthermore chapters and books too.Ill be waiting for the next chapter as well .
Writing Quality-Writing is unique and well thought-Attention-grabbing-I have not seen any errors or typos.Stability of Update-I'm assuming you update everyday so yeah, 5 stars!Story Development-The pace is not slow it's not fast either. It's perfect.-The story is smooth and captivatingWorld Background-The world background has been described vividly.-The readers will have an easy time to picture the scenes the author wants them to see.Character Development-So far, the characters seem very lovable and interesting to me.-They were described vividly.Overall:The story is amazing, and the plot is interesting and captivating. Readers won't be left behind for I assume that the author updates everyday according to his Author's thought. The descriptions are vivid, so it won't be hard to imagine all the scenarios taking place. Keep up the good work author???
Ada N.B di akhir sino**is tentang kepenulisan yang kurang bagus. Oke ... aku sudah memaklumi dari awal membaca chapter satu. Akan tetapi, bukankah lebih baik belajar pelan-pelan sambil tetap menulis novel? Jadi, suatu saat setelah novelmu tamat, kamu bisa revisi lagi. Perbaiki apa yang kurang seperti tanda baca dan PUEBI.Btw, aku suka nama setiap karakternya memakai nama lokal. Semangat berkarya! ? ??
This was really boring. I had hopes for some interesting character, but the MC was way too boring for me. I had to force myself to read through this series. I do not recommend this series.
A great story which is unfortunately not updated often. One of the biggest questions is how many evolutions can a Stone have before he either maxes out or turns into something else. I'm looking forward to finding the answer.
The story plot is awesome. As the name suggests the Hero is a curosity freak type character, something new that I haven't found even on Webnovel.No noticable grammatical error or mistakes found good job author.
Your novel is quite interesting and the synopsis is also fine background's fineon the minus side i just want to add that just write more words in order to elaborate more ^^ x