Is this how it ends? It's such a shame to end it like this. It has a huge potential, like reallyyyy. Huhuhu.
haist! the things that love can make you do.
Why is it taking so l out ng to get a new chapter? What is the rate? Overall the story is good but due to the slow rate of translation it is hard to maintain interest.
I wanted to give this book a try after seeing it do so well in ratings, and if you have chosen to do the same, and end up sticking with it, all the more power to you.
I for one just count get past the first few paragraphs of this novel with the fact that he is 18 shoehorned in, as well as other small fact, hammered in again and again, the same words used to describe just used to death.
Maybe the writing skills of the author improve, after all, it is just the first chapter. But the fact that they have felt 0 need to make any changes with how poorly it reads doesn't give me any hope for the future, or any want to continue.
I wish the the author the best of luck, they seemed to have cultivated a good following with their book, and I'm sure that their ideas have fleshed out nicely after being able to give the time to it, but as it stands now, in what I assume to be it's unedited state, I cannot continue with it.
Bro this is my favourite, i liked the powel scale in the one piece verse of this fic its amazing. ive read too many ”cliche” one piece fanfictions but this one blew my mind with all the suprises i shed a couple tears with xebec and the duo
It's a great novel but if the author can update it daily then, the fans will show more interest.
This is seriously good. The MC gets a fairly unique cheat, and he's smart enough to use it well. Also, his relationship(?) with his childhood friend is both realistic, and interesting to read about. All things considered, a top tier novel.
Regretfully dropping RtW.
The story, the character, the world is super awesome but all ruined by the qidian system.
The daily spirit stone won't be able to sustain RtW and other stories. In the long run, it will be worse as free user will have 0 SS and no way to read anymore.
In the beginning there is 10 premium chapter. In less than one week the amount grow exponentially. In the end after the story is being fully translated, the free user still have to wait for at least couple of years to catch up.
Please at least bring back ads system combine with premium SS or else R.I.P. free user.
I really loved the stories. They were really interesting. How you portrayed the characters in each was fantastic. Please keep up the good work.
This story is amazing and engaging and I frankly couldn’t put it down and still want more... I’d recommend this to anyone looking for a story with great characters good action some drama not too much and an MC that kicks ass
I'm writing this review after reading chapter 24, I believe is a chapter that would make various readers drop the novel so this review might help you all to understand why would someone would drop it.
Let's go with the facts and then I would give the author a proper critic;
-MC: It's has been told to the readers he was a member of Special Ops, if any of you were members of the military or are active members, then you'll find along the story this statement can't be possible. Not only the main character makes poor choices, but his actions in a alien environment without any back up and a system that he doesn't know how it works(nor the author bother explaining and detailing), puts himself in various scenarios a situation that even I, a former corporal of the army, wouldn't make in his situation.
Personally I believe that the job of an author is to make a research beforehand in the subject that his work might go around, to prevent this kind of things happening, more so when the author himself is gaining money out of it. It's our job to ensure that we are writing something that does make sense within the boundaries that we stablish.
Yet this novel lacks of the aforementioned.
-System: The system in this novel doesn't only is almost irrelevant, but counterproductive to the novel itself.
You see, it works as the mainly provider for the MC to get his hand at some arsenal, however, I don't know what the author was thinking since the way the system has been presented to the readers is awful. There's no explanation of how it works, details of the weapons and how the character might be able to get them, nor anything. What's worse, the main character itself doesn't bother(or hasn't been show and explain to the reader) to gain knowledge of it and how to use it on his favor, worse yet, it is conveniently overlooked for the author's own choice to be that way, since he could ensure his personal view on how the story should unfold.
With these two I believe is enough for any reader to put off from keeping reading this work.
Now for the author, the problem with your story is that for the reader, is clear how you wanted to reach certain points of the story, overlooking not only your characters, but world building at that.
The flow of the story feels weird and hollow, at every moment I was reading the chapters I felt there was so much for the main character to do and think about before doing what was explain in the story, that I found myself unable to invest in the story completely.
The actions and choices made from the MC doesn't make sense from a point of view of someone on his position. Nor does the choices you make willingly as an author for the direction of the story itself. I don't know if the novel improve in later chapters, since I thought it was necessary to make this review based on the first 24 chapters.
I don't know what else to say at the moment so I'll leave at that.