Good efforts at the age of 13. The content was good. When are you going to publish your second chapter
Simply amazing, I didn't even consider reading at first. Turns out it's hype! Kinda reminds me of Kuruko no Basuke and Slam Dunk! [img=Mad]
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An easy to read novel with good narration and good plot, the sentence structure is on par with most of the good novels here, I hope you keep writing author this is great!
Author how did mila offend you. Let me keep reading hoping she will be back, not even your hordes of demon kings will stop me!!!! if that doesn't happen.
Could be so much better
Boring and mc is idiot someone try to kill him in his team but still stay and act like nothing happened and in title where is the evolution of beast and the problem too is his beast grow too fast without resources but no one cares
Its a Pancakes Whitch novel you know its gonna be good
Not that good. One of the worst ways I’v seen an author handle system/skills. MC is still a coward, timid, boy 130 chapters in. Things that should be considered skills in real life the author doesn’t consider them skills. MC still lives his life as if he doesn’t have a skill system. Has no proactivity in tryin to get more. All his skills have come unintentionally and every time he freezes in shock like he forgot he even had the system. On top of all that it’ a slow paced novel which makes the issues even more glaring. This was better off not being a system novel if this was the route he was gonna take with the MC.
It's clear the author puts a lot of hard work into their story. The story updates often, and not a chapter goes by that some kind of new information is introduced that makes the plot more interesting. Keep up the good work, author.
Interesting novel, nice story development. good sex scene but when will you come and complete it? And the rest of your novels.pls we are waiting for you. Thanks