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Your story is cool. It has great potential. I would suggest to enrich the world-building some more maybe? And maybe the character design as well. Keep on writing author. ?
It’s alright
Author really needs to hire an editor and move up the pacing of the novel. Other than that it’s a decent read.
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Imagine living life on easy mode. Scratch that, imagine living life on 'easier than easy' mode. This novel's protagonist is living it.
MC's initialisation gift [from the system] is enough for him to advance to the next cultivation stage. The bonus reward for attaining the next stage is...enough points to advance to the stage after. Oh, and upon advancing each stage the MC will also conveniently be gifted everything he needs. From the very best cultivation manual, alchemy production, weapon crafting, and of course can't forget apex combat skills.
If all of this wasn't enough the protagonist is a complete rock. He feels nothing. He believes in nothing. He wants for nothing. He just cultivates.
I’m not really into these types of novels, and I’m not gonna read it, but on 12/5/2021, this man had a picture of JESSICA RABBIT as the cover! 5/5 just for that
The book is really good. What I liked particularly about it is that it flowed nicely. The pacing was just right, not fast or slow. It has a way of arousing a good amount of curiosity that keeps one reading.
Nice one, Author-san.
Too cliche, was gonna rate it a three star but well, I saw Kirito on the cover and decided to take some points off. Too cliche, was gonna rate it a three star but well, I saw Kirito on the cover and decided to take some points off.
I have read some or all of hundreds of novels on webnovel. This is one of about 20 that have had me anxiously awaiting the next chapter. The other books are decent reads but this one has me hooked. Extraordinary world building with a pretty unique magic system. Character building and progression is exceptional. World building is focused on progression of the world's concept of magic and is unique beyond words imo. Right now this is my number 1 book and it kills me when the writer's real life interferes with chapter releases, but they always keep us informed.
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Wow look at me, I am 10000 years old and have the maturity of an infant. Celebrate me for I have lived for so long without gaining anything.
Pro Tipp for prospective writers:
Don't create an MC you can't understand or even imagine. Stay with what you know and build up from there.
Even 90 short years are enough for humans to understand that arrogance and pettiness doesn't contribute to conflict resolution.