I thought it would be good, but the plot is too forced. The characters do unrealistically and uncharacteristically stupid things just so "coincidences" can happen and plot can move forward.
Author here:
Sorry for any grammar mistake or spelling mistake that I missed .
I have always wanted to write an original Gamer story and this is my first attempt at it..
It's a good VR game novel with a Female MC. I have tried to make the world building real and logical Thank you for reading the story.
Not my favorite Genre to read but it was worth the read. The story started at a slow pace, but at a good pace. Everything is described vividly and personally I don't speak game but the author described everything perfectly.
This novel immediately pulls you in and makes you excited to learn more. The world and characters are well established and easy to follow along with. The story flows great and is a great mix of adventure and humor. I dont typically like 1st person POV stories, but it really works for this novel! Excited to see how it plays out!
Just a copy of a different novel almost word for word guy tansmigrates has no talent and becomes blacksmith and forges his own body , plagiarism
TL is pretty good and the story itself very enjoyable. Probably the thing that separates this from other cultivation novels is the level of detail of the cultivation system. Sometimes I take it for granted but very few novels actually bother building up stuff that relates to body or spirit refining and their impacts on a person's strength. It makes estimating MC's strength a lot easier and is also just really cool. The cultivation levels themselves are a little scuffed but I'm pretty sure it's because it's supposed to be a build up for a completely different system for more advanced stages of the story and it just didn't happen yet after only 40 chapters. Hope this gets picked and although this story isn't a 5 star in my book it seems a lot of reviews lately criticize sign in novels for being unoriginal and tbh it just seems kinda stupid to me to expect a high level of originality from such a specific genre. There just isn't that much place to wiggle around when the cultivation system is already based And it's specifically a sign in novel. more of a 4 if i were to grade this accurately but i feel it's only fare so people can actually see this.
Don't waste your time here. .................................................................................................................
pretty good ,please don't make her start selling underwear or at least make someone else take care of the production process while she remains anonymous.
You should win the lottery for translating such a good novel.
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✓✓✓✓✓ <3 hooked from ch1 !!! Looking forward to next chapterss !! Lin yichen fighting!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
A strong start with solid progression.
The story really hooks the reader on an emotion level.
Seems very promising, I urge you guys to read, you won't be disappointed.
This is going on the top of my reading list.
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I really like how the story started. It brought in its own way a unique beginning. The story and the interaction are enjoyable to read and worth trying out.