Locked by Chapter 10.. No chance to see any quality development or story potential. Short chapters and rushed power explanations. Potential is high but can't be realized.
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great start .....!, no comedy element yet .. have to see .. hope he gets harder options in future.. harem come on .. more monster girls n...
Cliche and too common
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Writing quality alright
Story Development is underdeveloped
Character Design is undersigned
Updating stability is meh considering this novel won't have a chance for continuation
World Background is average. Nothing special about it. Like every other cultivation world Background there is.
It's really good with minimal mistakes which makes it readable. I find the formatting to be clear as well which puts me in a good mood while reading. I will be sticking around to it and see after 50+ chapters how I feel about it.
First, the book's synopsis struck me that it would be mainly about family matters, but it is definitely more than that. Second, The main strength of the story for me is the plot and having a relatable male MC, it is cool to have such a character. Third, The book's character design and story development were awesome and well-thought, I love the pacing and progression of the story while keeping some cliff-hangers from time to time. Fourth, the writing quality was good, there were technical and grammatical errors here and there but they can be fixed. However, maybe this is just a personal opinion feel free to disregard it hehe, I would suggest that there would be descriptions of the character's emotions among the dialogues such as their facial expressions, mannerisms, etc.
Overall, the story was awesome, can't wait for the next chaps!
Great otome novel. The story progress is fast and just about right. Story is not boring and each chapter is fun. MC is stupid and not likable bcz he is weird and not antihero, sometimes also not likable bcz he acts really cowardly and pathetic.
Great Characters
Great Backstory
Everything is just Great
hope the quality keeps improving
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I must say.. the author is talented and pls who else was overwhelmed with the first chapter... everything was in cold blood.. I can feel it but my question is how long will Kai keep hiding his powers
just passing bye??????? but its seems okay. yep just about to start reading this book
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