It's a very interesting book and I feel the way the author wrote the book was very descriptive but yet simple too. Otherwise it's a real page turner and I can't wait to see what happens next. Really hope the Author doesn't stop writing because that would be a shame.
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Great potential. Currently one of my favorites.Author keep it up!fillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerillerilleriller
Worst system ever plus story doesnt make any sense at all. MC magically save his dad plus died and save his dad again????? I mean.. WTH.. and the system talk too much. It should aid the MC not blabber this and that.. sigh
*Evaluation written at chapter 105*This is a real hidden gem ! I usually like my reviews to be long and detailed, so for those of you who want to read my wandering thoughts, just read this : if you are tired of omniscient killing machines MCs with a dumbass system, this western view on eastern cultivation fantasy is very worth trying !don'tOnce in a while, just when you look through all the trashy generic novels being picked up on this site everyday and decide it is a waste of time to search for a new readable novel, you stumble on something that makes you think "well, maybe there is still hope around here after all..."This novel is one of those times.First of all, at least for me, NO FARKING SYSTEM ! The characters are talented, yes, but that's it. After that, they can only grow stronger with continuous hard work. No robotic voice in your head gifting you with a divine cultivation technique, a godly fist art or a heaven-grade flaming sword every two days. Just hard work. Basic, maybe too blunt for some, but precisely what I am looking for.The writing quality is the second big plus for me. I remember Chalky say it's his first novel, and God I wish I could write like that. The pacing is perfect, quite slow but I think it is the only way to truly bring life to the characters. They are very well written, each with their own distinct personality. The MC is not a mass psychopathic slaughterer, as so many others. In fact he could even be considered a good guy, just that he grew up getting used to obeying orders. Whatever they may be... but I have a feeling that may change in the future. He does not win every fight, and he doesn't always make the best decisions. Some comments say he is weak and stupid. I say he is human. And still a rather strong one. His main abilities and the techniques he acquires are are quite interesting, very unusual for the genre but quite well thought through.The story so far is interesting, and the world quite solid. However, as of now (chapter 105), the MC is just strong enough to start to have a real view on the continent and knows very little of what lies beyond. No arrogant young master needing a faceslap so far either as all characters, friends and foes, are rather well built and coherent.So is it perfect ? Obviously no, nothing is. But for now it is a damn good novel, and a refreshing version of eastern cultivation I, for one, very much needed.So thank you Chalky, and keep up the good work !
Too early to write a review when it just began but whatever. For me it's a good novel and enjoyable read but the only thing that bothers me is that it looks like the System is brainwashing the mc lol, forcing him to do things yes but it just gives me those kind of vibes. Probably that's only me.
a great read. writing could be a little be improved cause I was getting confused that some dialogue weren't mark. And Im always kinda lost whenever the characters especially the chosen ones are introduced. all in all I enjoy reading it. the story really gives you the "what happens next I want to know what happens next?" vibes
Interesting,I love survival genres.////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////.
Long ago, the four nations lived together in harmony. Then, everything changed when the Fire Nation attacked. Only the Avatar, master of all four elements, could stop them, but when the world needed him most, he vanished. Luckily— What Lucky?! Go and read the story first before I continue!!!
Just read chapter 1 and I can tell you that this novel will be great. I always love this types of novel. Please don’t disappoint me???...............................................Why do I have to write more than I should ?
The MCs personality very much urks me, and the fact the the author tries to justify the pathetic personality of the MCs is even worse, a people pleaser is a horrid persona for an MC, and no matter how you try and spin it, that's exactly what he was doing, until he no longer needed too, but still tries to make them like him, so they put up with him, how sad, I might keep reading, and if it gets better, I'll retract this review.
This is the most mostly perfect novel that I could read during my vacation outside of my country side, never underestimate the trasnlation level of qidian