This story is wonderful! If you love TRPGs you should get a kick out of this. Just try to leave your preconceptions of a fantasy world behind. Some common stereotypes fit, while many are lacking. The author does a wonderful job of world building, and an even better job of balancing humor and cold violence. the only part of this i even thought about not giving full marks too is writing quality, and only because there were a few minor typos through out. After thinking more I decided that there is only so much perfection you can expect from a novel published on a daily basis with no editor. All in all a perfect web novel and one I am willing to spend all my coin on. Death to the enemies of Invictus!
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Shitty. Complete crap.... I wish i could give lesser stars... Just another story with a character who thinks with his lower end. Naive, disgusting and all the more ****
I would have expected this of a Japanese protagonist, never a Chinese protagonist.Here we have a White-Knight (incarnation of all that is righteous and heroic in the world) MC, who will make stupid decisions, and instead of being punished for it - he will instead be rewarded by the dullard of an author. Not once, or twice, but throughout the entire novel. Somethings shouldn't ever see the light of day. This novel is one of them.
Everything is good so far. I like the characters and writing style. Grammar is also good right now. Good luck on working hard. I think real start starts from the chapter 'Death'.
The translation quality just destroys the reading experience........................................................................................................
This is a really good book. I enjoy reading novels like these and you have really good writing skills. I wanna read all the chapters rn but I think I'm going to wait until it's completed because I really hate cliff hangers even though I also put it in my novels?.
Does this really work? I tried to cultivate other than calming the mind nothing else happens. And also I have read more than 100 wuxia novels
The story itself was amazing.There were character development for everyone(except filler characters)The writing quality was top notch for me and the story itself was well plotted with amazing detail to everything.The characters were well built and the death of Luna was made to be very emotional.I mean,I cried a little when that happened.Call me weak but who cares this story is amazing.The story may start out slow and you may not get it at first but as the story goes on,it will make a lot of sense.The story itself is very engrossing and well thought out/planned.One thing though,there was a slight lack of missions from the app near chapter 200+(or more)Overall,a good read and an emotional roller coaster for me.
Really greatly written fiction over here I found!The characters have some intense persona and their chemistry is even more interesting. Such a great read!
Just came across this book and reading it as been interesting. The writer need to put in more friction and romance to make it more interesting. Good writer and translator. Keep it up.
same genre that I like where mc is serious and not after building a harem.seems to start with the plot about martial arts and mages so looking forward to new updates.