Hello, um, correct me if I'm wrong but, your story is being plagiarized by an author named, WangJing, in the same platform which is Webnovel. Basically the same just with a different Title 'Slave Harem Rise: My Awesome Dungeon Life'.
Great writingIt's a wonderful book for those looking for African novels with a bit of fantasy.I can't wait for the next chapter to be uploaded.??
I feel that it is a pretty solid read with the main drawback being that it needs an editor of some kind. Still readable and you can follow the plot and story but some may not have the patience for deciphering some of the lost nuances. Chapters are on the shorter side so it isn’t really a large time sink if you read a chapter a day or so.
First of all, this is definitely staying in my library... Secondly, this book is "The Book". Those kind of books that an ordinary noob author like myself would spend a couple of years drafting out before exposing it to public view here on Webnovel, but I am sure there author did not spend that long. Action, thrill and all is definitely my cup of tea and how perfectly did the author of this work put it all together; like a Mozart piece. And if you are a fan of detailed description you should give this book a try.Wanna know why? Because this book gives a description that is NOT boring in any way. The storyline is top-notch, I got intrigued from merely reading the synopsis. Then the prologue is the lengthiest I've come across yet. But who ever said the prologue had to be short? This author is the kind that makes you open your mind to an array of possibilities. So, trust that he has a great deal in store. The writing style is authentic, and alluring the eyes. You just gotta keep reading. Updating stability is alright. And the premise of the world background is pretty good to me, I love how the prologue told us vividly, what happened in past times, and thrills our minds to anticipate the rest of the story flow, of course it followed immediately with present time with no need to dilly-dally thus wasting more precious time. Above all, author you did a great job. Bravo?????To the readers out there, pick up this book and devote your time to it. You'd have ZERO REGRETS. Be sure to thank me later for the recommendation. Winks*
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Story is a very climactic story and looks very promising for the future of this story. Has very good character design and story development. I look forward to reading more when updated!
Thank you all for your support readers. We won the Bronze Prize for the WPC. I'll be resuming my chapter publishing on the 7th of next month. Once it begins, we'll be going on a wild ride. I welcome comments, reviews and even criticisms, no matter how harsh. I also welcome encouragements. Once again, let's have a wonderful and dark read... It is about an Evil Protagonist after all.
Does he get his sister back I need to know.
Alright, i droped this at chapter 22, why you can ask ? (some spoiler ahead )Well it's simple and i think i'm not the only one who droped the story before it even really begin : The author made the mc too dumb (probably to make more chacarter developement later) , he doesn't make any rationals choices and is surprised over logical things everybody know.Let me explain : The mc get reincarnated in another world, (so far so good) but he is born as an half demon, then he get a system. The system force him to become a full fledged demon and he is now full of distrust toward the system. For this he decided... to stop drinking milk ?!? And then he is surprised that he will die in 8 days if he don't get sustainance ? Were you a human in your previous life (he was) or what ?And then just after that (really it should be in the same or next chap) he decide to explore the system and use a technique with the not at all ominous name "Demon might mystic technic" or something like that...And that just one exampleBruhAnother thing : the complete lack of imagination toward names, father = christopher, mother = chrystie...Still this story has some good points : the grammar, a big number of chapters, and an author who still read the comments of it's firsts chapters.If you can ignore the stupidity of the mc in the intial chapters, this should be your fit if you like demons and stuff (there is only so much i can take)But here is my honest advice to the author that i think could improve the story : First and foremost, rewrite the mc in the first chapters, this story has a lot of potential (just look at the comments) but the mc being dumb cost it too much. In the first twenty chaps, i saw the comments dwindle as i read. I dont know if the author has stats to see how many people read his story but i'm sure 50% of his inital readers (first chap) didnt pass the 20 chapters.Second, make more exotic name or least that don't sound the same (if you don't have any idea, use a generator on internet or just ask your community)And third, more descriptions : what i mean by that for example is the mc second pair of eyes : he get them when he become a full demon but where are they ? On his forehead, temples, cheeks ? Also are they pitch black like his normal eyes ? We don't get anymore info other that he growed a pair of eyes.That's all for me, thanks for the story
Enjoyed it so far. Wish it had more chapters and more than 2 daily. :(Hopefully it won't become 1 chapter each day in the end like some others that had 4 daily and went down to 2. I can't wait to see what happens further! good luck to the translator! :D
There were some capitalization errors and punctuation errors but other than that it was nice to read. The system having an attitude issue is also funny and refreshing to see. Also I think a lot of authors here can relate to the beginning
Great plot! I love to see the development of the main character as the story continues to unfold. Each little bit of information leaves you wanting to know more. Can’t wait to read the rest! Thanks to the author.