DarkFight3r
Just few chapters and already addicted. The universe is so deep that you can’t help but drown into.I like the characters building and the easy way the writing style brings us this magic/necromancy/alchemist references
es una historia interesante y divertida tiene una buena trama y y los personajes tienen una buena personalidad El H esta bien escrito aunque esta un poco repetitivo las ecena iguales en si la historia merece ser leída
I like this story, I hope the author will continue to be enthusiastic in his work.
Sakamoto has quite an image of my life in the past and is very inspiring ...
I like this novel but the author is very stupid. I know that he doesn’t want to rely on the system but he can learn magic from there. Where is the strengthening magic? If you don’t want to add aoe spells, it’s okay. The points are just piling up and he isn’t using any. Magic can’t be taken but you can use it like practice make perfect. You are just nerfing the mc. Where is the magic desolation scroll? Nicely written story but adding too many Chinese ideas about needing the mc is just plain stupid.
I think it has great potential, and a hint of romance would truly go a long way.
This novel is really intresting at the first chapter, the first scene take place in some sort of a bar it did gave me some wild west vibes except no shootouts, when it comes to the fight a scene the writing is very discriptive to say the least.overall this got me hook.
I'm not done yet. But so far, the story is great. And I'm expecting more from the next chapters. This novel is lit.?
I am loving this novel I like doctor novels and systems with the two combined it makes an altimate novel in my opinion hahhahahahahahahahaha
I absolutely love this story 100% would recommend can’t wait for the next update. The only issue I have is then constant stat breaks in the writing it make the flow of the story a bit rough but I know that it is needed so I can live with it.
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Wow it has potential but it has no action i got to ch. 80 and drop it , if you could rewrite it and made the characters more interesting and add a smidgen of action it would be the best story.
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