This is a promising vampire fantasy , i hope the author continues in this current path. The story is great to read , the battles, the evolutions , I'm loving it .
Noice book :D
Bro, the first chapter of your story has emotional depth, and it's hard to judge the entire book based on just that. But I can tell you, you can add a mystery tag if you want. I feel like you should start with Renzo in an emotional way and make it suspenseful if you don't mind.
This book is really good and intresting, I truly enjoyed to reading it.
Author here, I just want to thank all of you for reading my novel. English is not my native language, so I hope you will forgive me for my grammatical errors and misuse of words sometimes.Also this is my first work so the starting chapter quality is not definitely the best but I am improving myself with each chapter so you freely can give it a try, the story is getting good as I am finding writing really enjoying... also after this arc I am gonna refine the whole work but don't worry the content is not gonna change just going to adjust minor cliches and repetitive sentence...Thanks for reading.
This is my first time ever reading a novel so i don't know how this type of story goes but I Can tell by the quality of the story keep on writing I will read hmm maybe i will a story myself inspired by you?
sorry but I find it Confusing. hope it improves.
Would recommend this novel even though it doesn’t have many chapters right now. The premise is very original and the main characters are somewhat fleshed out right now considering the amount of chapters we have. World building is sizing up to be quite impressive with all the other provinces having their own unique culture.
One of the best webnovel I have ever read bro, keep writing mate.I really like the mc, but plz make him and anti hero with no redemption arcs later.:3
I want to laugh, but this is really stupid, this is really stupid, I want to laugh seeing the stupid comments of readers on this site, they frame that most readers of trash webnovel are immoral, but they themselves are the biggest contributors to this site, I want to ask, is there a website where there are many moral restrictions for its writers? even though what they write is all fiction, not real, it's like you kill in a game, is that immoral?
Story about a young boy named Evel who from a innocent boy becomes a bloodthirsty demon..(not Blood thirsty but flesh hungry)..?
The idea of the story is excellent and had me invested almost immediately.The plot moves a little fast, but that isn’t much of an issue.Writing quality is pretty good, very few mistakes.Overall, this is an excellent idea, but it’s execution needs refinement. I do not follow the logic for many of the actions the characters take, and plot holes are prevalent, especially in the early chapters.With a bit of rewriting and editing this could be a 5/5 story; keep it up author!