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Hey, not a bad tale! From the first chapter to the last chapter it's clear you're getting much, much better! I think to make it flow smoother you just need to improve your grammar and sentence variation. Other than that, keep writing everyday, and learn from the best authors you can find. Try and spot the differences between their work, and your own, and bridge the gap, bro.Keep it up~~~
The book is amazing, and the MC is actually not so OP (only a little bit OP). The start is confusing and the knowledge of the MC about the game is incredibly pitiful but that is understandable because the game is not his priority in the first few chapters.*SpoilerThe whole game-y part of the novel starts later. The MC's focus is getting money from the game by farming crafting ingredients that he sells for gold then converting them into real world cash.
Basically the MC can also fly. I could explain but I kind of got lazy. Speaking of laziness, does this massage thing really work? There's always in the cinema how something that relaxes you doesn't seem to have much effect without medicine. Like a placebo. Going back to this MC is that he can cause a sleeping person to become more tense. Like a demonic villain where instead of relaxing each period of sleep only causes more pain, fatigue and discomfort.
So... getting to the point.- The pace of the story is too slow- To actually enjoy reading this novel just pile up a hundred chapters then go, once you are finished with those 100 chapters stop, and wait for another 100 chapters to come out.- People say all the filler content is actually the author being careful and is actually developing the world, the characters and plot... Nonsense its filler! It is tedious to read and there is a bunch of stuff that is overly explained! Please author, Im not a 5 year old who is not capable of ****** obvious assumptions.- Story is actually pretty cool and the concept is amazing, characters are really good. It is fun read. - The setting of the story is overly explained. Chill author. - Did I mentioned that things are overly explained? Well... yes, things are overly explained. It is sometimes annoying. (Im looking at you ED!! It happens with you as well!)- Will you regret reading this? No, read it now! But if u get annoyed just stop and wait for chapters to pile up. In big amounts.- Yes, my 3 is because I hate filler. It is not development, its filler.
The writing ✍ quality ? is good ? ?. Story line is just great ? ? ? ?. love ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ to read ? design ? ❤️ of character ? is fantastic
Hello and welcome to EndlessFantasy Translation, where we do just slightly better than MTL because we know how to change the names of characters from chinese to english. Grammar? Pronouns? What are those?Aside from this, the story is just trash. It's terrible. The pacing is slow and the plot is boring. There is nothing imaginative about the story at all, the MC is exactly what you might expect as a system-turned noveau riche. All the side characters are defined by their job with personalities so shallow its borderline unbelievable. The rich guy is a rich guy, the reporter is a reporter, the talk show host is a talk show host, the coworker is a coworker. They have literally no personality or character development and it appears the author doesn't intend on changing that.TL;DRWish fulfillment story, except the characters are shells and the translators westernized all the names.
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has fallenblue truly fallen in the battle or something cause this is not a joke .author were are youyou can't stop this at mid like this at lest tell us beforehand or just say you can't continue atleast we will stop looking for updates