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since its my first ever book i will try my best to do a good job in giving the best book that you'll read i would also appreciate if you add it to you library thank you
Author you speak like....this which is... very annoying to even... read.....Don't get me.. started on the other parts...Example.. can't understand.. what anyone.. is saying or person..speaking..
I ain't gonna lie, what intrigues me the most with this book is the writing quality, and after each chapter, you just want to keep reading.
HELLO AUTHOR HERE.GUYS IM SORRY BECAUSE OF MY EXAM I CAN'T GIVE ANY CHAPTER.PLZ FORGIVE ME. AS SOON AS MY EXAM END I WILL GIVE CHAPTERS. BUT THIS TIME THE NOVEL WILL BE MORE GOOD I HAVE ALREADY prepare something in advance. JUST WAIT A LITTLE BIT.
This novel is really interesting I mean in every chapter there must be an action that spices it up.And I really like the way flora handles the situation.
He raised his hand, and the barbell suddenly started to rise on its own. My jaw dropped as he lifted the barbell up, then down, then up again, while his hand was repeating the motions. Needless to say, I was shocked.
i considered the plot very nice,and unpredictable.
The story is good and I'm looking for further chapters
I hope you don't write your though in the story.. there is creator Though in end of Chapter, so the reader didnt pay for something that not for story
i first watched anime, then i watched untamed then i became obsessed so i read manga and i read novel now and I'm still not satisfied I'm addicted hahahah, it's amazing and it can easily break your soul and heal it at the same time, all the love:)
Right so I'm redoing my review because the author couldn't take me disliking his work and deleted my review XD Anyways the novel is an average work with nothing special going for it. It's a typical novel with an added edginess to it. The author set up the story pretty well in the first chapter and I'm sure this is how a lot of people got hocked but after that its a slow ride down typical cliches I've seen many a time.If you want something to read quickly as junk food while you wait for other novel's to update this isn't half bad for the purpose.
This novel had a very good start, an eagle clone as a separate body is a very interesting concept. This part is surprisingly well done for such a mediocre novel.But let's start from the beginning.The world is a standard Cultivation world, with a death zone full of treasure only the MCs clone can access. Not much detail about either the world or the Cultivation system. MC is your standard OP genius who was held back by fate, or in this case his soul was to talented for his body. His childhood friend, a beautiful genius, helps him survive until he gains strength.The whole thing has been done before, but there are enough twists to make it interesting.But here the trouble starts, standard enemies popping up everywhere because he is seen as trash and everyone else is so bored they can only pick on him every time he meets someone new. Classic repeat, MC either kills them or shuts them up with his strength. Classic village noop destroying the strong forces backed seniors. Every character is either a villain, a week damsel to be safed, a pin-up senior, a pin-up teacher, a pin-up childhood friend or something else for the MC to ****, kill or turn into a servant. No character besides the MC has a worthwhile backstory, consistent motivation or anything unique.MC has powerful friends(even in higher positions in other sects) , a pretty talented childhood friend, nearly unlimited wealth and every opportunity he needs, but he still goes the standard scumbag rout of trying to get every girl he comes across.In one moment he is a wise, experienced man who can endure hardship, in the next he randomly kills a minor annoyance and in the next he riskes his life to either gain a girl's attention or to gain prestige. He literally risks his life to kill a snake stuck in a mountain to impress a girl he has seen twice. He could have run in the beginning, after saving her or anywhere in between, but no, he has to show that he is dangerous so that anyone in the world can get a shot at him.In between, the auther even forgot that the MC had a clone for like 20 or so days.Beware, starving of small animals.The Harem route and the typical stupid villains destroy this novel.
