Good writing quality and stuff but it feels rushed and the author doesn’t seem where the story is going it goes from apocalyptic world into sudden mythology based modern earth with little to no explanation
I wrote this novel for myself, it’s very helpful as a guidebook for creating reality. God Blessed.
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Well, I didn't start reading yet but I'm looking forward to this because I'm a fujoshi ?? yaoi is very scarce in here. ??? can anyone recommend some BL stories to me? ??
my review for this novel(im not a hater, contains mild spoiler, I've read till chp 16)caution: read this novel if you doesn't care for faulty power/combat/levelling system and quite brain dead mcthe story starts with how apparently weak the mc was. due to reason i'll not say, he arrived last at the school when they are giving free skills for first timer, making mc only get the last skill left that is self healing. nothing is wrong right? it was said that people can train to get attribute points and skills. with self healing, the amount of time mc could train the body is many times longer and receive benefit faster than other people, yet he never does this. mc is actually quite a clever kid, he managed to create an arrow almost as good as a b rank wood arrow by using a c rank wood (cost much lesser than b rank wood) + slime urine which is practically free. he also manage fool the guard by selling the c rank arrow at the price of higher than a b rank arrow. oh so you readers may wonder why do i said the mc is brain dead and the system in this novel is busted right?now here is the problem, the first chapter is showing how mc, a lv0 human fights a lv1 frog monster. you would see nothing is wrong here right? casual fighting monster 1 lv higher than you right? well, all is well until you see mc damages is only 1dmg when the frog deals like 30 dmg from normal attacks. the reasoning why his dmg is so low from the novels is that mc have no attacking skills (mc have benn whining how he have no attacking skill for all those 16 chp). but wait, you would think that stats influence the effect of normal attacks and skills. if an attack skill let you increase damage by 10%, with mc damage(that is 1 dmg), he could only dish out 1,1 damage which is way worse than his self healing which can heal his health for quite a good chunk. so the way i see it, he gaining self healing is way better than having attack skills. but than i notice something, you use magic skill by draining stamina? like wtf!! in the novel mc doesn't even have mana. if so, how the f other people gain mana then? its not like there is no poor people other then mc right? is gaining a magic skill unlocks mana? that can't be because he already have magic skills. why don't mc change his skill to a physical one then? he could always barter with other people for an attacking skill outside the school.honestly, the author is making level gap a big of a chasm. a lv1 monster can deal lots of damage against a lv 0 human is honestly mind boggling. its not like a monster gain 3-5x the amount of stats human gain when leveling up. if his damage is already so low, wouldn't it be better for mc to just chuck rocks from a safe distances using hands or slingshot, at least it reduces his chances of receiving dmg. besides how the hell mc as clever as he was never tried to team up with anyone else? even if he have low dps, he could be a tanker because his self healing. if his class is his enemies, he could go to other class to team up right? its not like everyone is an evil bullying bastards. he could also report to the teacher that he was close to for all his bullying which he never do. you could argue that mc is a loner/introvert but even i as a loner/introvert could report and ask help from others. he also have a very sick sister, which he very desperate to cure. so there is no excuse at all for him not to team up with others. his attitude for not seeking any help in all that condition is honestly just sheer arrogance and brain dead in my eyes.
Have you started again? Only drawaback was the stopping of the novel for almost a year. Everything else is just top notch.
Writing pace pis a little fast and main character get super OP real quick but I really like the direction the story is going. Even though I said the character gets super OP real quick I dont hate it. The only issue I have is how her family treats her after she wakes up from her coma I feel like that section should be slowed down a bit and expanded upon just a tad more.
At first I thought this would just be another run of the mill op story because of the title. Well I happy to say it is not the premise so far is really good although I don't no know how long it will last for before getting old. I hope this is one of the novel that keeps get translated.
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a true hidden gem, it is a story with a lot of potential and although the grammar can be improved it is understandable and each chapter is improving. I hope you keep up the good work friend and don't drop it