BeyondTheLaw
very interesting game novel with OP mc heheh+++++140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140
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Hey this is author talking I'm just writing out of boredom, also English is my foreign language. there will be no steady updates as I will write whenever I'm bored. thank you all
There is nothing inherently bad about the story. I think the author missed one day of udpates, but he's pretty consistent. You know... like he has three stories, but he writes all of them... like consistent.
The plot seems good, characters seems all nicely written. Translation quality is good. Even though it's like all the other type of wuxia but this one still peeks my interest. It totally stands out among rest of the novels.
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Best novel. Combines elements from western fantasy with chinese literature. The story had a very nice way of keeping me addicted. I liked the ideas for the power systems he indroduced. They were amazing and i would love to read more
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Hi, I'm new here so idk but here's my two cents..The progress of the plotline is too slow. Honestly I come for the BL, but I can't even see who the pairing is, what will be their chemistry, when will they meet (if ML is not one of those characters you introduced already), how they appearance is like...Well, I thought it would be Bai Chang, since I like bromance lol, but nah.. idk you'll make it that way, and everything is still so vague.I keep going because I wanna see the BL in the setting you've created.. but so far I only get the setting... at slow paced, and no sight of romance ever happening.. I wonder where is the supposed romance in the BL category.It lacks the giddiness, the events, and even Bai Cong himself is quite vague, yes he's not emotive and too mature for his age, but the way you narrate it make it even more so.Nevertheless, I look forward to new chapter to see any developments in the BL area... Wanna see progress so bad.
i mean its readable so the translator is doing a decent job, but the only word to summerise this novel would be "Why?" dont get me wrong there are good novels that are about playing games there is even one about playing a computer game on a screen but atleast they are about some sorta super advanced new game and not ****tyass pubg...
Not gonna read this for now, but, I feel like the Omni in mastery is unnecessary. Since Omni is a very strong and serious word. Omnipotence, omnifarious, omniscient etc etc. Someone with Omni-Mastery would essentially master anything and everything instantly. If you see someone swinging a sword at you, you would know exactly how to deflect, avoid or parry the strike. Why? Cuz you've just instantly mastered swordsmanship and control of your own body & mind. Just, don't mess with the word Omni unless you mean it in every sense of the word, since that's exactly what it means.
I can't say anything yet about update stability, and the translation quality is alright now (it wasn't at first). (Also, whenever the new translator/editor went in and changed the main character's name from Rinc to Link, they also changed all mentions of 'princess' to 'pLinkcess'. Which is kinda funny, but also annoying.)Anyway, the novel is a very interesting read so far. I like the main character a good deal, and the 'game system' doesn't give him the easy road for everything. Well, it kind of does give him everything a mediocre magician could need, but it establishes early on that Link will need to rely on his own efforts to become truly strong. And I really like that about this novel. It's a transmigration novel about a video game world, but it really feels more like a fantasy novel with a few cheats. It's a great balance. Definitely worth a read.
