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To be honest, when I first read the name, I though it would be regular novel with apocalyptic theme, but your first chapter surprised. I really like this novel, and I'll continue to read it! Keep it up!
I don't have a well-formed opinion for the play yet, but I have a general idea of what I might encounter.
In general terms what stands out the most is the character design, you can see that they were thought beforehand to make them more realistic but it remains to see the development they have regarding their actions and their ambitions.
The writing quality is good, I can understand everything well although sometimes there are small words that could be changed for others, or rewrite sentences, to make the reading more fluid. But you can see the author's commitment to write something with quality. Good job!
The world background has not been explained but some things are assumed in iceberg fashion. As the name suggests, "Urban Emperor". You know what might be there.
Without further ado I will wait for other chapters to do another review, but I don't go away disappointed with another poor quality new work. It has the potential to be a lot of fun.
I just hope for two things:
Firstly that there is no nasty NTR towards the protagonist. I'll never understand masochistic horn-loving authors, but to each his own. I'll just leave with a bad taste in my mouth.
Long live the Mary Sue MCs who take the beauties!
And secondly, may the MC not be a freaking hypocrite. If he's evil let him behave like one. If he's a "nice guy" let him be as such, and even if he's a middle ground. To each his own nature in his actions. But I can't stand the implausible twists of hypocritical protagonists.
This book is very good, I recommend those of you who like books with this kind of genre to read it, I guarantee you will like it.
I hope you all will like this book.
This is a really exciting novel. I beg the webnovel gods to pick it up.
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I'm a simple guy. I see "Harem", I add to library.
I'm a simple guy. I see "Harem", I add to library.
I'm a simple guy. I see "Harem", I add to library.
Ahhhh!!!!! all of my beloved tags in one single xianxia novel !!!!!!! Gandalf is this heaven ???
Enough BS. Loved your story. An enjoyable read.Finally I found a hidden gem. Thank you a d please dont drop it.
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This story is like a good beard: 9/10, would fluff. The world needs more of this fiction, please continue. WQ: 4. SoU: 4. SD: 5. CD: 5. WB: 4. Total score 4.4
this is going to be my first review after checking out 3 chapters of the story. so far pretty good we expect the typical vr gaming background if you have read one before. i just dont like the mc character pretty coward . he got this old classmates bullies for some reason he is afraid of them and my imagine is running wild because a normal guy would only be afraid of physical bullying since base on my opinion and info i have read so far, he is someone who does not care about social life. somewhat of a recluse quiet child .If i were the mc i should at least try to do some self defense he is 5 feet 9! if i am going to bully him as a 5 6 when i was 14 years old back then i will at least think twice regardless of his physical type. the bully trope is getting old now a days since we know that typical quiet child is not afraid to pull a trigger to kill his classmates like in america hahahah.
i want to see our 5 9 mc grow some backbone if he is being physically intimdiated because as i mention i dont see the mc getting affected by words or insult to have that kind trauma. so i say it is pretty unrealistic to me as a common citizen
so far very good introduction. i think i need to read more chapters before updating this review but it at least got me hookup and the story is interesting.
One of the best game stories in webnovel that gives me the SAO vibe. It was beautifully written with several layers of mystery that made me keep guessing and ask for more.
It's written by a talented young author who really did her best to write, find an editor, commission cover, etc. Let's support this author and hope for the best. Well Done Author
great novel unlike other stealing stuffs this has great story nice character and a sense of realism and some what humar with it
if u can't even support this book then it's your lose when u guys cry for getting a cliche boring protag