I came here from Wattpad after falling in love with this unique superhero story. I love the down the earth characters that each have their problems and ways into looking at situations. It really reminds me of a persona game in that light. The build-up to the Garden and the past behind Alton and the loss of his former allies at Sunset Peak is exciting and something that's got me hooked. The villains are all different with even the smaller one-off villains getting detailed backstories. Paradox is looking to be the next big threat, and I'm super excited to see how this slender man type villain will work and what their reason for trying to take down the heroes.
Personally I really liked the character development not only of the MC but also of the secondary characters, it's rare to see that in Isekai and that's what made me abandon the genre a while ago.Another positive point, the author takes his time to describe the situation, I think that in a good novel the author shouldn't rush the story since without pictures you need a lot of details to appreciate the story. Good job, nice discovery for me ?Like what has been said in other reviews, I think the biggest flaw of this novel is the spelling errors, I advise the author to correct them, at least in Chapter 1, since a lot of new readers will not go any further.
Three phrases: I lost the sense of Time, my mind was fresh and relaxing when I read, The world is immersive and the system of cultivation is wonderful.
this was really my work my acc was been hack 3 months ago and unfornunately i cannot update the novel sorry for the old fans who enjoyed it but i will try to make a new one.
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Please support the work of my favorite voice actor, you guys. He's a really great writer plus he's creative and a handsome minor. It was generally well-written there are a few minor mistakes but overall it's good.
A bit of a slow start, but hooks you in once it’s started. Interesting characters with unique personalities, and relationships that make sense. Big fan of the magic system and the world, or what little we know of it. Definitely has potential to be a very good novel with plenty of excitement and thrills
The story its not bad apart from a few things that should be changed the first its the stability of the releases its just too slow this story for sure its long but with this slow release after some time a lot of people would drop it
definitely has great potential, although you can see some of the influences of other stories it's still pretty unique. I recommend it to anyone who is also frustrated with spicy human monster novels. The only two things I could complain about are how I wish there were more chapters to read, and I feel like some chapters feel like half of a regular chapter. I've read a few now where it's just been the mc going to a different area like the lake or other things like that. I'd much rather you just combine these novels into one, especially if I have to use free passes and coins to continue reading the story. The regular updates helps to soothe the hurt a little bit but still, I'd much rather not use up my free passes and coins on chapters like that. Also to the author, I want to ask if there will be any romance, I hope there isn't romance or the monster equivalent of it.
started reading todayn i think this story has great potential so imma give it a 5. The only think im worried about is that the author may drop it in like 50 to 100 chapters.
What can I say I enjoy apocalypse novels and have not seen any set in a fantasy setting with reincarnation and a point system. I like how the MC is more practical and less optimistic than the typical protagonist though I do think he, at least in interacting with the slaves, is not acting nearly as ruthless or logical than should be expected. E.g. giving them a choice to work for him or go free with 100 gold. That is a waste of resources and ridiculous when the fate of the world is at stake though obviously we knew none of them would decline.
I assuming his is your first time writing, it's good. More effort needed, except MC, other character look good to me. Story need to slow and explained. World Background null, give it a time.